For raw, unedited copy, it was a really good read. The only glaring error I could find is when Vitto is identified as Luc, but with a large cast of characters that sort of error can be expected. As always 5 stars.
Keep the chapters coming and let Tressa find her backbone along the way! Either she's learned her lesson or she hasn't. Clearly she hasn't. She trusts the people that lied to her, gave the orders to kill her and mistreated the people of her country. They don't have her best interests at heart. Granted, the rebels don't have her best interests at heart either. I hope she starts to think for herself and then sticks to the decisions she makes.
DAMN!! Now that's what I'm talking about. Now this is 10stars all the way. Now if you could just update so that I can get on with it. Also LOVE WHAT YOU DID WITH MY GIRL T you have brought her the backbone I was expecting from her and I thank you. I am soooooo happy that she finally got the clue regrding her father sorry to hear about her cousin knowing what really happened however glad to know that he did not get killed even tho she got Adrian hurt with her stupid ass move. And as it would play out she still don't freaing listen and left the man and her new family behind after they told her to stay put. I really hope that she stays as the ruling Queen with Adrian as her King. With this in place I hope that the people will be able to trust that she will make everything right. Will granpa die before all of this comes to a head? Will her father be caught and brought to justice for what he has done? Not only for taking the crown as he has but leaving his child in a house with a blood thirsty mob on the way to kill him? He has thrown her to the wolves again and I hope she shows his ass what a fucked up pops he is!!! GOOD JOB!!
I can not get enough of your story! While the sex is amazing, like someone already said, it's not even a necessary for me to keep coming back to read more!! I am huge fan, please continue St. Vicente or like another individual suggested, tell us where to find it's continuance. Please!
I can not get enough of your story! While the sex is amazing, like someone already said, it's not even a necessary for me to keep coming back to read more!! I am huge fan, please continue St. Vicente or like another individual suggested, tell us where to find it's continuance. Please!
I see you are back so please, please, please continue this story! It is so exciting and by far one of, if not my favorite out of all the stories in this category!
by
Anonymous08/07/12
Don't leave us hanging!!
I hope that you continue this story. Its one of the best on this site. Please finish!!
please come back!
After reading the first chapter I checked if the story was finished, I usually never read unfinished stories, but the you already had me hooked. Someone wrote that this is the best story on the site, I have read so many fantastic stories so I didn't really expect to feel the same... boy was I wrong! I have to agree with that reviewer and say that this really is one the best, and I truly hope that I will I get to read the rest of it :)
I have to say, that despite the drama, I appreciated the Romeo and Juliet esque theme, & no I don't think I could forgive my lover if he killed my cousin either! Then again, I don't think I could ever forgive my lover if he pulled a gun out on me & raped me. This story is nuts! But in a good way, for entertainments sake, Also I am completely convinced that her eggo is preggo. Post soon! =)
First, good story.
Second, how is this interracial? I don't mind reading same race romances of any ethnicity, but I was some what confused that all the characters seemed of one race, until she was described as having chocolate chip nipples... maybe I missed a paragraph somewhere.
Well, like I said before, good story. Cute adding the part of her being a romance writer. Looking forward to the next chapter. I have 'writers's block' so I won't dare whine for the next installment... yet. I'll give you a year before I start to complain...lol
by
Anonymous08/13/13
OMG!!!
To be honest I doubted the title of this story but I figured it wouldn't hurt to give it a chance and read it...now I'm it's the best one I've read!! I understand life can get in the way but please try to finish it coz you've gotten us hooked and we want to know how it all ends. P.S beautiful written :D
This can't be the end!! I'm still holding my breath!! God lawd this is a good story... So many twist and turns I'm getting whiplash!!
I agree with TooMuchEnnui- I'm hopping in the "eggo I'd preggo" wagon.
I hope we haven't read the last of this aaaaaamazing story!!
But this story just CANNOT end this way. Please finish it.
by
Anonymous09/04/14
Bull
It doesn't make sense for Bull to not give Adrian the message. He's been one of Tressa's biggest supporters, and surely he knows Adrian enough to know he's also fallen for her? Hope you finish this story, it deserves it.
I really hope you continue this story. It's one of the greatest that I've read!
by
Anonymous03/15/15
chapter 5 please
OMG! Really that was it..
by
Anonymous02/05/16
MORE !
omg you can't write a story this good and leave us hanging ! pls pls continue it
by
Anonymous02/24/16
Another unfinished story
When will I learn to check comments in the last chapter to see if a story is unfinished.
It is so frustrating and for that reason I give it 1 star
by
Anonymous12/22/16
5 years
I've been waiting 5 years for this story to be finished. The author's profile says that it has been update this year. Does anyone know if she writes under a different name now?
English
*****
Five.
This was good:
ITA. Five.
Tyfu
Thank you for updating
I'm loving this story so much that I feel sad when it ends :(
PLEASE update again soon!
Five stars.
Love it!! but please make him look for her tho. they have a crazy love but its their love tho and no one should stop that. cant wait to read more
Really good
For raw, unedited copy, it was a really good read. The only glaring error I could find is when Vitto is identified as Luc, but with a large cast of characters that sort of error can be expected. As always 5 stars.
awesome
For unedited it was amazing! please, please don't take so long for the rest of the story!!! (he has to find her!)
Hottt
Love it! Please post soon I'm anxious to read what happens next! Lol thx!
Glad you could update!
Keep the chapters coming and let Tressa find her backbone along the way! Either she's learned her lesson or she hasn't. Clearly she hasn't. She trusts the people that lied to her, gave the orders to kill her and mistreated the people of her country. They don't have her best interests at heart. Granted, the rebels don't have her best interests at heart either. I hope she starts to think for herself and then sticks to the decisions she makes.
Hope you can get the next chapter done soon.
UPDATE... lol
I'm sooo into this story! It would really make my day if you updated this really soon...Pllleeaase lol keep up the great work =)
I'm ready for an update!
OMG!!
Its killin me to wait 4 more lol Hurry!!
HOTTTTT
DAMN!! Now that's what I'm talking about. Now this is 10stars all the way. Now if you could just update so that I can get on with it. Also LOVE WHAT YOU DID WITH MY GIRL T you have brought her the backbone I was expecting from her and I thank you. I am soooooo happy that she finally got the clue regrding her father sorry to hear about her cousin knowing what really happened however glad to know that he did not get killed even tho she got Adrian hurt with her stupid ass move. And as it would play out she still don't freaing listen and left the man and her new family behind after they told her to stay put. I really hope that she stays as the ruling Queen with Adrian as her King. With this in place I hope that the people will be able to trust that she will make everything right. Will granpa die before all of this comes to a head? Will her father be caught and brought to justice for what he has done? Not only for taking the crown as he has but leaving his child in a house with a blood thirsty mob on the way to kill him? He has thrown her to the wolves again and I hope she shows his ass what a fucked up pops he is!!! GOOD JOB!!
Great
updates, looking for more on them; even a baby in the near future and for her father to reaped what he has sown to the people and his family.
more, please???
WHAT HAPPENED
Say you are not abandoning the story....please!!!!
Please continue this story it is absolutely wonderful, I am addicted to it, I don't want to go through withdraws.
Different
Please continue this story. I love it. Come back!
Good Read!
More please! I want to know what happened to Tressa, will Adrian come looking for her?
Please continue!!! Or at least tell us where we can find more.
OMG IMA CRY
I WANNNA READ SOME MOREE AND THIS TIME I DONT EVEN CARE BOUT THE SEX ';[[[[
PLEASE CONTINUE!
I can not get enough of your story! While the sex is amazing, like someone already said, it's not even a necessary for me to keep coming back to read more!! I am huge fan, please continue St. Vicente or like another individual suggested, tell us where to find it's continuance. Please!
PLEASE CONTINUE!
I can not get enough of your story! While the sex is amazing, like someone already said, it's not even a necessary for me to keep coming back to read more!! I am huge fan, please continue St. Vicente or like another individual suggested, tell us where to find it's continuance. Please!
More
Plzz finish the story we want more
pleaseeee...finish the story
there should be an ending. do not be cruel. end this pleaseeee...
You're Back!
I see you are back so please, please, please continue this story! It is so exciting and by far one of, if not my favorite out of all the stories in this category!
Don't leave us hanging!!
I hope that you continue this story. Its one of the best on this site. Please finish!!
^0^
Please continue when you have time ^-^
More Please!!!!!
Need more! Please!
noooooooooooo
please come back!
After reading the first chapter I checked if the story was finished, I usually never read unfinished stories, but the you already had me hooked. Someone wrote that this is the best story on the site, I have read so many fantastic stories so I didn't really expect to feel the same... boy was I wrong! I have to agree with that reviewer and say that this really is one the best, and I truly hope that I will I get to read the rest of it :)
I have to say, that despite the drama, I appreciated the Romeo and Juliet esque theme, & no I don't think I could forgive my lover if he killed my cousin either! Then again, I don't think I could ever forgive my lover if he pulled a gun out on me & raped me. This story is nuts! But in a good way, for entertainments sake, Also I am completely convinced that her eggo is preggo. Post soon! =)
just curious
First, good story.
Second, how is this interracial? I don't mind reading same race romances of any ethnicity, but I was some what confused that all the characters seemed of one race, until she was described as having chocolate chip nipples... maybe I missed a paragraph somewhere.
Well, like I said before, good story. Cute adding the part of her being a romance writer. Looking forward to the next chapter. I have 'writers's block' so I won't dare whine for the next installment... yet. I'll give you a year before I start to complain...lol
OMG!!!
To be honest I doubted the title of this story but I figured it wouldn't hurt to give it a chance and read it...now I'm it's the best one I've read!! I understand life can get in the way but please try to finish it coz you've gotten us hooked and we want to know how it all ends. P.S beautiful written :D
wow, i hel my breath at every chapter!
Finish it!
This story is way too good to just sit here unfinished.
Stoooop It!!
This can't be the end!! I'm still holding my breath!! God lawd this is a good story... So many twist and turns I'm getting whiplash!!
I agree with TooMuchEnnui- I'm hopping in the "eggo I'd preggo" wagon.
I hope we haven't read the last of this aaaaaamazing story!!
Really?
So I guess this was never finished. How lame.
This may be futile...
But this story just CANNOT end this way. Please finish it.
Bull
It doesn't make sense for Bull to not give Adrian the message. He's been one of Tressa's biggest supporters, and surely he knows Adrian enough to know he's also fallen for her? Hope you finish this story, it deserves it.
Can't wait for more!
I really hope you continue this story. It's one of the greatest that I've read!
chapter 5 please
OMG! Really that was it..
MORE !
omg you can't write a story this good and leave us hanging ! pls pls continue it
Another unfinished story
When will I learn to check comments in the last chapter to see if a story is unfinished.
It is so frustrating and for that reason I give it 1 star
5 years
I've been waiting 5 years for this story to be finished. The author's profile says that it has been update this year. Does anyone know if she writes under a different name now?
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