All Comments on 'My First Time'

to your writing career. I thoroughly enjoyed the pace of your story and descriptive narrative of the action. You obviously write at a level above most of the other authors, based on the well edited and lack of grammatical errors story. Keep on writing. I for one, am looking forward to reading your next entry and the next, and the next . . . (you get the picture, don't you?)

Nice story, a woman touch. Enjoyable.

Very tender and honest, but still terribly erotic.