by TenthDoctor
I loved this one - thanks for posting! Five stars, no messing - more like it, please!
You wrote so well...I guess you were just tired of the story. Five plus, until the end. Please write the sequel!
First, thanks for writing and sharing your story.
Second, I loved the way it was going but the ending was too abrupt for me. You wrote with nice detail during the build up and then you just jumped to the end (not his climax but the details of the story).
Thanks again.
Hope she woke her inner Domme and continues to own that lucky man!
A girl who believes that turnabout is fair play.
I pretty much had decided that she was just pure evil, from the smirking and "bitch" name calling. It looked like her "joy" was simply in making guys miserable and controlling them. No capability in her heart to love.
We'll see what the next chapter brings.
Is that they're SO easy to dump. This one showed her true colors. She's a manipulative bitch. Time to move on.
Funny how all the trolls are too cowardly to use their names -- fucking wimps.
This was one of the best stories I've read on Literotica -- I don't give out many 5 star reviews but you earned this one.
Every time she talked to him, he jacked off. How would she know? Idiotic story.
I read this whilst doing a similar "3 day project". I hope my ending tomorrow is just as tormenting as this story. 5/5
Well crafted. i would've liked it more if it went on for three days instead of just the last few hours.
Good premise.
Could have used him being forced to describe to her what took place in the videos she sent him to watch. If there were different girls in the video, which one did he like best? Why? What part/s of her body did he like best? Why?
Four stars.