This is delightful cherry_Rose. You have a talent for writing and it's nice to see English spelling (rather than "ass" - which I've always known as a donkey ;) ). The few minor proofing errors could be easily fixed (let me know if you want a pre-reader - I've done that for others here).
i love anal sex and it was so hot hearing it told from the woman's perspective. the level of detail in your descriptions made the passion and emotion jump off the page. i really enjoyed this story and look forward to reading your others.
geez cherry, you are my new fav author on literotica thats for sure! Not many people can combine a steady pace of writing with your level of descriptive writing. gota read some more!
Thanks to everyone who offered feedback.. Even um, the interesting lady who felt the need to give a related monologue of her and her husband sex life by means of feedback... I appreciate the thought, and time each person goes to.. So cheers for that :)
English
Bloody Loved it !!
Made me read your other stories
This is delightful cherry_Rose. You have a talent for writing and it's nice to see English spelling (rather than "ass" - which I've always known as a donkey ;) ). The few minor proofing errors could be easily fixed (let me know if you want a pre-reader - I've done that for others here).
xxx B
great story!
i love anal sex and it was so hot hearing it told from the woman's perspective. the level of detail in your descriptions made the passion and emotion jump off the page. i really enjoyed this story and look forward to reading your others.
Yummy!
Loved it, can't wait to read more of your stories!
I could almost feel it
mmmm, what a delicious, romantic, HOT scene! Thank you!
Utterly
delicious.
well pop my cherry!
geez cherry, you are my new fav author on literotica thats for sure! Not many people can combine a steady pace of writing with your level of descriptive writing. gota read some more!
Hmmm..
Thanks to everyone who offered feedback.. Even um, the interesting lady who felt the need to give a related monologue of her and her husband sex life by means of feedback... I appreciate the thought, and time each person goes to.. So cheers for that :)
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