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pretty good
could have done without the gay guy sex, but other than that, quite a creative concept
Never
thought that there will be another spin on this 10,000 year old story. You know, I LOVED IT. 5*s. VERY Cleaver.
old times
I did like the take on the story of adam and eve. I thought that you could of really indulged in this story a little bit more, but it was very good.
Bravo!!
What a concept, this story was highly intriguing. I too wish you have stretched this a bit further, you're an excellent writer and I would've loved to have read much more!! Since u have the knack for writing anthropological stories would you consider writing one where modern man came into contact with Gigantopithecus? You probably know this but just in case scientists theorize that if Bigfoot exists it is probably a relative of this early hominid. Five stars and thanks for sharing this well thought out, highly creative story. K
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