All Comments on 'Oyster Creek Ch. 01'

by Soebek110

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
nice ending

But you left us hanging hope there is a part 2

What is so special about the Oyster Creek General Store?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great!

Definitely want part 2!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Since this is Chapter 1,

I think it is safe to assume there will be more to it, Anon.

Also, given the amount of time Soebek110 spent setting up the background of Oyster Creek General Store, and Daniel's exile to it, I suspect Soebek110 will reveal why it was so important to it's founder and, eventually to Daniel.

Nice start, Soebek110, and I'll be looking for future chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
I didn't finish reading it

All that bitching and whining for almost an entire page...

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
a lovely start

and good to read another (British) English story (the Yanks will have appreciated the translation at one point).

Hoping to see at least a second chapter in this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
A lot of extraneous crud.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Aw shucks

Hmmmm - caught banging the bosses wife but the most embarrassing thing to ever happen is a book falling to the floor. Then a quick "hello" some Q & A and "Let's fuck" - hmmmm

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