by manyeyedhydra
I absolutely loved it. That story was something completely original and unexpected and I loved every moment of it. An original take on Santa and his elves in this light was something I would have never dreamed of. Amazing story just like every other one of yours. Keep them coming.
I'm always tempted to tweet you and tell you to get cracking on more stories! They are sooooo amazing. Your page is bookmarked and is the first one I go to when I get on Literotica. Please make more and make them soon!!!
Sorry I couldn't log in to rate this. As was said this is really looking at the whole santy claus thing from a different more effed up angle, just like me. :D I loved it.
Grimm223
I think the most horrifying part wasn't so much the butchery as the assembly line dispassionate nature combined with... well the fact that they're making CHILDREN'S toys! <shakes head>
Well done; not the most erotic story you've written I'm afraid but certainly one I wish I hadn't read before going to bed.
Well done!
You are really, really good!! This is my first read of your stories but I will definitely be looking for you! Thanks for the wonderful Christmas story!
A strong story, with good characterisation, a great start to the tale, and finish - with Santa bracketing the main story. Plot wise the horny elves weren't quite as integrated with story line although the sex sequence was well written.
An enjoyable read - reminded me of Shaun Hutson.
Not sure, if you were planning it, but the thought of children playing with their christmas toys without knowing what they're made of, is (to me) more horrifying than Butcher Claus killing of the boys on his no present list.
MEH, you never disappoint. Well done, my man- sexy and horrifying at the same time.
Nice to have a story where the guys actually deserve to get it this time, rather than the usual unfortunates you kill off. Good stuff.
You have yet to disappoint me.. and this one, by far, captured my imagination and filled my heart with fantastic flutters of erotic horror that I cannot get enough of.
Thank you! It is perfect!
First, it was hot. Then it was brilliant. Now, I'm left with horror and a slight regret. Your mind sure knows how to make one shiver in horror.
Um It was kinda creepy at the end so yeah i hated it ur story is never gonna win
Huh during the whole thing I had a weird feeling strang scary shit was gunna happen. Even weirder that I was right.
As always you write the best stories, it's been a while since one of your stories made me jump. ;) Bring back some more horror~ And more succubi related stories. Think up of new concepts and characters.
oh wow this was.....pretty interesting. I liked it bit of a twist to Santa and christmas kinda like what you'd expect in horror channels and films (which call me wierd but i like scary movies an shit like that) though yeah it was kinda creepy too at the same time though if you wanted gore could've said blood started spewin everywhere an they were blood thirstin elves. or somethin like that idk Point is it was great AND creepy but in a goodish way MERRY CHRISTMAS ALL!!!!
Would really like to hear more from this story. Maybe a sequel? Oh by the way, just how is our dear friend Phil doing? Haven't seen him in a while, did Rosa and Verde get around to consuming him altogether? Or did Nurse Honey, finally collect her debt?
Wow good read, and great unexpected twist at the end. It was really hot with the elves in the cabin, but I soon forgot about that after reading the end in the workshop haha
lolz naughty ice nymphs toys and beheadings rotfl they never saw that coming. awesomeness keep this crazy going
You should make another one on how they get bad girls there :3
Bad boys always get their comeuppance... or is that cumuppance lol
Great read - thank you!
OMFG how horrifying is this? D: if only this actually happened to scum that deserved it. But not being made into toys, that's a bit too fucking nasty. ._. Terrifying to a slightly erotic extent, but definitely a situation that I NEVER want to be in... '_'
S-o-o-o he really does know if you have been naughty or nice..Children of all ages beware he is 👀