All Comments on 'Confessions of an Erotic Nature Ch. 02'

You need to get your genders straight. I think you are writing about he but you use she. Quite frankly, it does not make sense and is quite confusing.

Dear A,

I'm sorry you found this confusing (others ranked it a 5/5). This is a correspondence between a woman (Stella) and a man (her lover, Hank). Perhaps you could read the first instalment posted a little earlier under Confessions of An Erotic Nature. I checked and there are no errors in gender so I'm hoping it will be clearer if you read what precedes this second instalment. I'd really appreciate your second feedback if you do so. Stella

Want/need more.