Food for a Dragon

And then?

More!

agree! More!

Fantastic!

YES - definitely need more chapters!!!!!

Very Nice beginning

I like it. I look forward to more!

Please sir....

may We have some more?

This is a promising beginning.

It will be fun to discover where the dragon takes her...and what happened to Ann's predecessors. Maybe life will look up for Ann now.

Nice Start...

Your story has great promise. Your writing style is clear and concise. I look forward to see how this story progresses.

i really like this

It made my pussy pulse. Thanks. =)

More. Now.

This is not a request, this is a demand, your story is amazing, I don't know what I'll do if you don't write more.

I really hope there is going to be more!!!

I Hope there is another chapter to this story! it was amazing! :)

Perhaps a little more?

The story felt really rushed and there wasn't much going into the actual senses rather than trying to get into the sex. Add some more detail next time and really put in all 5 senses to a point where the reader can really see and feel what is happening.

More in mind?

Good start, and the potential for a dragon with a harem is neat.

Thanks

Thanks for your comments, mentioning that I need more detail really helps, I look back on it and know you are right. I will try an edit at some point to fix this.