I have to laugh though who on earth actually calls someone a "minx" ? This word must be in the must use words registry. LOL
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Anonymous11/17/11
very nice
although it was kinda predictable it was a very lovely story, as for the minx comment; unbelievably i am actually called a minx quite often by a couple friends when i do something that is out of my realm of acting. so people do use the word just not as often as some would think.
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Very good but predictable story.
I have to laugh though who on earth actually calls someone a "minx" ? This word must be in the must use words registry. LOL
very nice
although it was kinda predictable it was a very lovely story, as for the minx comment; unbelievably i am actually called a minx quite often by a couple friends when i do something that is out of my realm of acting. so people do use the word just not as often as some would think.
Very sweet
A lovely, straightforward story, cerainly a good jumping off point for a continuing story if you want, but a very nice story all by itself
I REALLY ENJOYED THIS STORY
as has been stated the outcome was predictable, however, I would like to see a continuation which may or my not be pridictable.
Papa Griz
P. Griz said it well.
I enjoyed it and thought it was right "sweet" little tale. Thanks for the story.
wonderful
this is great, but you left it open for a part 2
of a romantic love story
please finish it
Awwwwww !!!
Nicely done only one 'bad' word in it.
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