It really is a story, not just a frame for a description of sex!
I have read it more than once, and I never read things a second time, if I don't feel "comfortable" with it.
Yours is always such
Keep on,
John (Namizujs)/Budapest
by
Anonymous06/16/09
This was cute & I enjoyed it, but...
This was cute & I enjoyed it, but I could see it all coming before it got here. Given the title it was very predictable.
-- srgeek --
by
Anonymous12/02/09
A brilliant story so full of humour
really enjoyed reading it especially as the sex is not in your face from beginning to end just a good story - loved the description of the guys wig looking like 'he was being attacked by a hairy teddy bear' - what a vision of fun that is especially having seen some horrendous examples of 'syrups' That's Cockney rhyming slang for 'Syrup of Figs' - Wigs
by
Anonymous11/13/12
Thanks for the great characters
I've met several people like the characters in this story. You have a writers ability to bring them to life on the page.
Thank you. Please write more.
by
Anonymous07/11/13
Sweet tale
Thanks for this one, yet another little beautifully crafted piece. Keep em coming please!
by
Anonymous11/15/13
8~)
DKP
by
Anonymous11/13/15
I LOVED IT!!!!!!
Oh my gosh! I absolutely loved this story SOOOO much! Not only did I like how funny it was, it was erotic enough to enjoy it, but no so much that it had me going red. Great job!!!!!!!
English
A fun story, and a budding romance?
Quite well written with good development of the main characters, and a lot of fun with the innocent meeting theme!
Bravo
It is really nice to read a bit of erotica with a story. Too many of the stories are just all sex and nothing but sex. This was great.
It is a STORY, not just some sex..
It really is a story, not just a frame for a description of sex!
I have read it more than once, and I never read things a second time, if I don't feel "comfortable" with it.
Yours is always such
Keep on,
John (Namizujs)/Budapest
This was cute & I enjoyed it, but...
This was cute & I enjoyed it, but I could see it all coming before it got here. Given the title it was very predictable.
-- srgeek --
A brilliant story so full of humour
really enjoyed reading it especially as the sex is not in your face from beginning to end just a good story - loved the description of the guys wig looking like 'he was being attacked by a hairy teddy bear' - what a vision of fun that is especially having seen some horrendous examples of 'syrups' That's Cockney rhyming slang for 'Syrup of Figs' - Wigs
Thanks for the great characters
I've met several people like the characters in this story. You have a writers ability to bring them to life on the page.
Thank you. Please write more.
Sweet tale
Thanks for this one, yet another little beautifully crafted piece. Keep em coming please!
8~)
DKP
I LOVED IT!!!!!!
Oh my gosh! I absolutely loved this story SOOOO much! Not only did I like how funny it was, it was erotic enough to enjoy it, but no so much that it had me going red. Great job!!!!!!!
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