by crialia
Looking forward to finding out what is in the rest of the boxes.
I hope they are as erotic as the first one. Keep up the good work.
did he get those machines out of his uncle's house? The kind of insatiability these things cause would turn regular users into stalkers. A little army of security guards would be needed to keep out his harem.
Love to have one of those!!! Can't wait to see if there's more toys hidden... Thanks
Comeon, you start the story line and then goof off.
What's the point of reading anything from you?
RP
this could be a great series please give it a try you've got me really curious.
Sure would have been real nice to have an Uncle like that tho my logical mind says that these devices are strictly of non-earth construction . . . forerunners of an invasion from the planet Porno perhaps? Hmmmm?
This is so well written in erotic detail and great storyline, I so badly want one of those machines and I hope you make this a pornstar series or something cause I want to experience what's in those other boxes!
Thoroughly enjoyed that! I would love to read about other some of the other gadgets.
Great read im glad i stuck with it. Tbh, the start was very clunky. Im trying to figure out who sally is, its jumping backwards and forwards, and also repeating information. But once you have them in the house together, its smooth sailing. Well written. Its an interesting choice to have it switch perspectives. I usually prefer just to have one POV character. Well done anyway.
This story has always been fantastic, and I love it. You take your time explaining things, and it's so detailed and realistic that I can see it all happening. It's a great quick read, as well as one you can sink into for ages, and it's got all the bases covered.
I'd like to put a little easter egg in one of my own stories to this one, simply referring a name to the name of the uncle in this story. I hope you don't mind, and I'll be referencing its yours and your story anyway. :)
@iamcontrol - thank you for the compliment and I have no problem with you referring to my characters or my little universe.
I've always loved coming back to read this. Of course, always wishing for a continuation. That said, great story :)
A great story, well written, good plot
I really felt her arousal. The detail of the clitoral stimulation was delicious.