All Comments on 'Imaginary Beach'

by Magna12

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SpiritogreSpiritogreover 12 years ago

The problem with this story ... since Dan and Alice are supposed to be from Europe they should know that on ordinary(!) beaches almost half the women are in fact going topless. And even full nudity isn't such a problem in many areas even though those spots are usually a bit seperated from the ordinary beaches. So I can't really relate with the problem Alice seems to have. She should be used to it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
ello i am Nikolas

my wife says this is the only erotic story she has ever squirted to. I make her squirt every night but this story got her to spray at least 15 yards. good good story. i am lucky man. tank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Well Done

5 stars

BjorntufukBjorntufukover 12 years ago

My only complaint about your writing? You don't submit enough stories, but I'll be damned if they aren't worth every word you print. Please make more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Nice

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