One New Message Ch. 01

The best mind control

the best mind control I've read in a long time.

A very good piece of writing

Thank you

Very good start! The loss of control is nicely done. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Nice work

Very well done. Looking forward to more of your stories.

Language OK

Sorry, I just didn't like the story. Something to do with the tendency to use women made to be inferior.
Just a personal thing. I like my woman to be built up to be better than they realised they were and consequently they want to be better lovers.

Meh

It was alright for the most part but it seemed to occur too easily!

HOTT

HOTT

Shame, not finished

Very good story, well written and with the potential to be extremely hot. It's a shame then, looking at the date it was published its not likely to be continued.
My only gripe with the content is the rapidity of the mind control, a slower process with progressive humiliation would be nice.

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This was a really good story, I mean REALLY good. I hope you'll make more, but I doubt it. Anyways, it was really good, did I say that it was really good?
Well, it's really good.