I really liked this story. I hope we get to see Matthew get Sandra's friends next. I look forward to it. Just don't take TOO long.
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Anonymous11/17/11
What next?
The logical progression is friends, neighbor and mom. If the stories continue to be written this good I will read them regardless of who gets done next.
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Anonymous11/17/11
great story
milf, friends then mom than maybe a full blown fuckfest with everyone
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Anonymous11/17/11
not bad
I think that you need a good master yourself. That would be your best present ever. On the whole not bad at all you get a 5 from me (slut)
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Anonymous11/17/11
would love to see it
Bets Present Ever: Sister's Friends
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Anonymous11/17/11
"D" all of the above
Would enjoy all 3 tales ,come ahead with them
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Anonymous11/17/11
never happen
there is no way this would ever happen in any stretch of the imagination. he would never go back if he had to put up with a bitch like her keep it atleast somewhat realistic or put it in the fantasy area. a guy like that would have found a job so he could have a reason to stay at college and skip the holidays and summer typical trash for this site we need better writers.
This was a very hot story and I think you should write more. I think the other three stories you listed should be your next pieces of work. Good job n keep the stroke stories coming!
sis's friends
milf neighbor
mom(she can be the new years conquest)
really good story though
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Anonymous11/17/11
Another delightful story!!! :-D
Logically, sister's friends would be next as they plan how to get the MILF neighbor, who then helps in seducing Mom on New Year's Eve :-D I don't suppose the neighbor is a teacher, is she???? LOVED IT!!!!
In fact, here is the edited version I sent to the author:"“Ta-ta-ta, my baby sister,” I teased, snapping off a few more pictures, including a couple of close-ups of her cum-coated face. “You do remember who is in charge, don’t you? These are just for posterity. Although they may also come in handy if you decide to not be the obedient little slut I expect you to be.”
Apparently the author disagreed with my edit. Would hardly have been the first time. Perhaps the author thought "prosperity" opened the door to future blackmail. Que sais-je?
As for the anonymous commentator who said that this could never happen in RL, how does s/he know? How much would s/he have bet in September that Joe Paterno would not be fired by Penn State before season's end? Had someone written a story in June 2010 about Penn State's football program being a center of child molestation, they would have been laughed to hell and back. Truth is invariably stranger than fiction.
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Anonymous11/17/11
The next chapter should have BOTH Mom and the neightbor together and getting caught by Matthew and to protect their reputations, both become dominated by him.
My sister came to my bed and let me finger her when she was 23 and I was 19. Eight years later, when she was in the middle of a messy divorce, she and I fucked for the first time. Damn, it was good.
That was a great start to this series. You can write any of the three chapters first and then follow it up with the next one until all three are written. You have started a great series about Matthew, and how he becomes sexually active and dominating over his sister and others.
vote
I vote for Best Present Ever: Sister's Friends
Great story as normal
Next please- Best Present Ever: Sister's Friends
next
Sisters friends definitely
great story
next please best friends
sister's friends
What a combo, incest and reluctance!
Always enjoy reading your stories and the next three in this series will be very interesting reads...... looking forward to reading all three of them.
awesome story!
Next sets: friends, neighbor, mom, group - excellent read!
Great
Friends, then Milf finally mom
fab
MILF next plse
Cool
Loved the stockings/garter aspects they helped me too. Nice one darlin'
Looking forward to the next one
xx
Friends then milf
Friends then milf
MILF neighbor next
MILF, definitely!
Nice
Sister's friends.
All three!
I would definitely read all three!
Friend for sure
Friend that will be sexy
Excellent!
I really liked this story. I hope we get to see Matthew get Sandra's friends next. I look forward to it. Just don't take TOO long.
What next?
The logical progression is friends, neighbor and mom. If the stories continue to be written this good I will read them regardless of who gets done next.
great story
milf, friends then mom than maybe a full blown fuckfest with everyone
not bad
I think that you need a good master yourself. That would be your best present ever. On the whole not bad at all you get a 5 from me (slut)
would love to see it
Bets Present Ever: Sister's Friends
"D" all of the above
Would enjoy all 3 tales ,come ahead with them
never happen
there is no way this would ever happen in any stretch of the imagination. he would never go back if he had to put up with a bitch like her keep it atleast somewhat realistic or put it in the fantasy area. a guy like that would have found a job so he could have a reason to stay at college and skip the holidays and summer typical trash for this site we need better writers.
best taboo story ever.
This was a very hot story and I think you should write more. I think the other three stories you listed should be your next pieces of work. Good job n keep the stroke stories coming!
Great Story
As usual another great story, I think a MILF story would be great for the next one.
Excellent bit of writing and just long enough to get the reader interested in more.
SOOOO Hot-can't wait to read all three
That was so hot. I can't wait to read all three. My pussy is quivering in suspense.
story order for the fantastic series
sis's friends
milf neighbor
mom(she can be the new years conquest)
really good story though
Another delightful story!!! :-D
Logically, sister's friends would be next as they plan how to get the MILF neighbor, who then helps in seducing Mom on New Year's Eve :-D I don't suppose the neighbor is a teacher, is she???? LOVED IT!!!!
--J
amazingly depraved
It has to be MOM.
is he going to sell the pictures?
great story, but unless he is going to sell the pictures for money, they would be for posterity - not prosperity. Loved it though. Please write more!
More!
This should be a series much more to cum I hope!
Also enjoyed the humour of the 23rd film night!
Next Story
I would love to read this next Best Present Ever: Mom, and that was a great story of the bitchy sister.
I thought I caught the "posterity" error
In fact, here is the edited version I sent to the author:"“Ta-ta-ta, my baby sister,” I teased, snapping off a few more pictures, including a couple of close-ups of her cum-coated face. “You do remember who is in charge, don’t you? These are just for posterity. Although they may also come in handy if you decide to not be the obedient little slut I expect you to be.”
Apparently the author disagreed with my edit. Would hardly have been the first time. Perhaps the author thought "prosperity" opened the door to future blackmail. Que sais-je?
As for the anonymous commentator who said that this could never happen in RL, how does s/he know? How much would s/he have bet in September that Joe Paterno would not be fired by Penn State before season's end? Had someone written a story in June 2010 about Penn State's football program being a center of child molestation, they would have been laughed to hell and back. Truth is invariably stranger than fiction.
The next chapter should have BOTH Mom and the neightbor together and getting caught by Matthew and to protect their reputations, both become dominated by him.
Great story need to do all three, any order
Finger and fuck
My sister came to my bed and let me finger her when she was 23 and I was 19. Eight years later, when she was in the middle of a messy divorce, she and I fucked for the first time. Damn, it was good.
Good Chapter!!!!
That was a great start to this series. You can write any of the three chapters first and then follow it up with the next one until all three are written. You have started a great series about Matthew, and how he becomes sexually active and dominating over his sister and others.
More please...
Any Order you prefer, although the suggestion of mom and the neighbor does sounds intriguing. I am looking forward to seeing more.
Excellent
Loved it!! Very well written & so many possibilities to continue on with. Looking forward to more!
Great story
I wood like to read them in MILF Neighbor. xoxo your way
Milf neighbor
Please!
possible order for story
OOooo....that was HOT! I think sisiter's friends since tyhey are already slaves & willing....then MILF neighbor to help seduce Mom
Definitely looking forward to this series continuing (in any order, but I guess I'd vote for Bets Present Ever: Sister's Friends)
order
1 Best Present Ever: MILF Neighbor
3 Best Present Ever: Mom
2 Bets Present Ever: Sister's Friends
pretty good
sex scenes could be more intimate. I vote for the slut's friends
Sister's Friends
I vote for this one but any you wrote would be great
great start.
Friends first then the mild in frount of loser of a son....skip mom
Excellent
Really enjoyed that and want more so please do sumbit:
1 Neighbour
2 Friends
3 Mom
Superb
list
1 neighbor
2 friends
3 mom
4 neighbor and mom
5 sister and friends
Great story.
Great story. My choices are 1) MILF 2) friends 3) Mom
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