Best Present Ever: Bitch Sister

Intering story, but...

A mouse that roared after nearly 20 years of wussiness? And with an 8 inch plus? Common, man...

Hot Story!!!

Loved the story! It was very hot...it was great to jack-off to!!!

Would love to read about Mom (1), MILF neighbor (2), and sister's friends (3)!

Deacon

GREAT

love it, would love to read sisters friend next, followed by milf then mom

continue writing,

very well written. please continue with more stories. start anywhere you like.

More

That's no place to stop.. love that story.. Keep going

Brilliant!

Asking us to vote for the next chapters is a great idea. I vote for the MILF as his next conquest. This chapter was a fun read, well written and flowed nicely. Thank you.

Awesome story

For the love of all that's perverted, please write the rest of this series. I think it should go- sisters friends first. He can build up his dom side here and get is harem. Then the milf story. That way he has more expirence with older women and can learn about the plan to get his mom He can also get his revenge on the bully. . Then mom and he can become the new head of the family.

Thanks again and five stars.

Great idea

I also think it should go friends milf and then mom with revenge on the bully to boot making him know his mom is a slut to someone he used to beat up

Enjoyable read.

She got what she deserved. I'll smash the sister friend next. That accent haunted his fantasies too long.

Sisters Friends

it would seem like a Logical way to go and easier to Accomplish then the Next Door Neighbor and Last but Mot Least Mom.

Posterity oops!!!

An apology to Estragon my great editor...I saw his edit...thought I fixed it, but clearly didn't...a new edit is being sent to fix the error...

Thanks all for reading...and your support...

Jasmine

PLEASE CONTINUE

I would love for this too contnue, it hits all my fetishes minus squirting in one story!!

All 3

Loved the story . Hope you will continue. Would like to see many more chapters. Thanks

More more

Great story, I vote for sisters friend(s)

friends

you're on a roll. sister's friends next. good stuff

Great story! Sisters friend is my vote

GREAT STARTER!

It's a toss up - Sister's Friends or MILF Neighbor. Either one is fine, just be sure to do both! Loved the story, now please continue.

Great story. Would love to read sisters friends next!

Great story

I'm greedy I want all three stories, maybe he can get sis to do dad while does mom, just a thought.

Great story

I cum twice and I ate both of them because I got so turn on.

Great story

I loved this story. My vote is the mom. Please keep the story going.

Excellent Story

Well written easy to read... In my estimation this is so far the best Christmas story...
I enjoyed the character interaction Matthew and Sandra at home before the party...
The interaction between Sandra and her two submissives' Beth and Della added to the story... Finally when Matthew takes control of his sister and the way he did it was very interesting.... The sequence of the followup to the "Best Present Ever" should be as follows (1) Sister's Friends, (2) MILF Neighbor, and (3) Mom...
again I would like to say this was a great story...

This Story

Is one of the BEST incest story that I've ever read...
Please continue on with more chapter...

Vote 6 if I can...

All 3

great story and I want all 3, MILF, MOM AND FRIENDS, just do it!

My Vote

The next chapter should be with the mother after she has been seduced by Mrs. Raske. Great holiday story. Keep up the good work.

Order

1st - Friends
2nd - Neighbour
3rd - Mum

Get to it :)

Friends, neighbor, mum for sure!

I like this guy :)

he put his bitchass sister in her place (on her back, naturally), and proved he's no wuss, and no future cuck

bet the cum-guzzlers hate being shown up by a real Alpha

wonder how this character would do in a "loving wives" segment?

I'm sorry...

but this guy doesn't even resemble a virgin. Virgins don't torment the object of their desire. Virgins cum almost instantly. Propensity is the word your looking for, not prosperity. Finally, you can't spread a girls legs and the pull her shorts down.

While I realize this stuff is fiction and rarely makes perfect sense, your story is just too far fetched.

Votes

1. Sisters Friends
2.Neighbor
3.Mom

Where is the Christmas ????

Good story but it had nothing to do with Christmas... Because of that it gets a 1

Best Present Ever: Sister's Friends

great story, keep'em cumming

you think!!!

best friend,then neighbour,combine them,,,,,,,mother last,cherry on the cake so to speak! add a sprinkling of some more bondage,a bit of cp and more of the lingerie and it will appeal even more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
well done!

Milf Neighbour

Milf Neighbour has to be the next story, But the other two are just as important to keep the whole thing going.

brilliantly written.

awesome

i would like to say that i WANT MORE.

What do I want? ..

Mom last. That goes without saying (that would be the icing on the cake before he returns to Harvard). The other two ... cannot decide which order. OK, Sister's Friends (both) first in readiness for MILF neighbour.
Great start to a story. Thanks.

Thumbs up ! XD

Hell yeah ! That was awesome. You should definitely continue this story . As to which
you should do first .... Well cant decide , they all sound so deliciously exiting . But if it goes with Sister's Friends hope you include the lab partner! XD

Great Story

And the others have it right...the proper progression is friend, neighbor, mother...CAN'T WAIT!

a TRUE pantyhose lover will have them wearing...

...crotchless pantyhose not stockings and garter or thigh highs,,,

IF you are a TRUE pantyhose lover then that is what they ALL are to be wearing...

Nice....!!!

I liked your story, and if you choose I like the direction the story could go. First one of his sister's friends, the 'Brit' and then the MILF next door, and then finally his own mother? Your certainly are creative. Maybe the MILF and MOM could come together and visit him and his friends in Grad School.

all three would be good

i would like you to contiue the story all three would be the best way to go . the story got me hard

Loved it..made me so wet..love to here about the MILF neighbor

:-) yummy

Hey there
loved the story. The order I believe should be friends, MILF, friend's - well Beth's mother then upclose and personal with his own mother

Five Stars!

It was so hot!!!!

Perfect story

I would like many continuations to this.
MILF neighbour, then Sisters friends, and finally Mom. In that order please.
ES

Excellent

All your stories are really enjoyable, this promises to be a really great series. I vote for the MILF neighbor next but think the friends would probably be the next logical choice. I can see lots of hot action in this series a great follow up series would be what happens when Matthew goes back to college can see a lot fun with college girls and professors. Keep writing

Great story

Like your story and loved the Dominant Brother Sister theme. Keep that going with deeper submission on sister and her friends part. Get Mom to become his fuck toy as well. Train Dad to be the Dominate one as well taking all of the sluts.

Love to see where you go with this one.

Great start!!

Friends, MILF,Mom....

Very good story

...but minor errors such as "prosperity" for posterity and "lied there" were a bit of an annoyance. There was very little character development other than a vague sense of intellect for the main character, but no application of it. Also, by your name, you love silk stockings and they are reflected in your characters, but dont write it off as being "unable to explain". It's a fetish for you, so describe what is so erotic about it, the passion will show through in the writing.

Those points would be fine, but coupled with the wooden dialogue, this story will stay at "very good stroke story" but if you were to expand it into series, a little more character development would be great, especially for a master/slave dynamic, as the emotional connection is essential.

Also, as a holiday entry, it was a weak connection, it only felt that it just happened to be Christmas, but I liked the holiday traditions being taken advantage of to further the sexual agenda.

Overall, you still got high marks, but I feel you can do better. Looking forward to future efforts.

Very, very good

Fantastic story, I would love to read more.
I would like to see friends next, I have always been a big fan of the mfffff slumber party type stories.