Best Present Ever: Bitch Sister

Great story

would really like to know more firstly about the friends,then the Milf neighbour & lastly mom.But also developing the master sister slut line too.

Very hot

A great story and nicely written and edited. I would like to read about him fucking his mom and then his mom and sister at the same time.

Thanks for the great story.

Excellent story

Well written, edited, and contrusted. I gave you a 5*. Good luck with the contest.

LOL I need an editor

Constructed

Great potential

This story has some great potential to continue. Get the neighbor next, then have her help get his mom. Then he can have the three have a slave orgy with sis's other slaves.

Keep it up

Fantastic so far...do neighbor, both seduce Mom, then on to Beth and Della

Best story I've read in a while

And please for next one: Bets Present Ever: Sister's Friends

Wow

It is hard not to masturbate during this story. It was so good I had to after I voted. One of the best I have read in a while.

Sister's Friends, please.

NYLON LOVER!

Hello J,
Just call me the baby carrot lover! I finally signed up on Literotica!

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I Love your Stories!!

I have read all of your stories and I think that you have the start of a great series here, no mater which edition that you do next.

Sister's friend

I vote MILF neighbor

Hope you'll continue

I'm votin for sisters friend since she already had a taste of him and would be an easier transition from this one. But i'd leave a lead to the milf at the end like you did here, then again if you continue, for the mom.

And i will say this is by far one o the best i've read. Please please write again and continue this to a series!!

sister's friend would be the next......

Love your story!!!

Does your slut sister smoke? I bet she smokes Virginia Slims 120s with long French tipped slut nails. Keep up the details about her and others in sheer shiny nylons! Loved your story and hope for WAY more!

Loved your story

I would love to read sisters friend next

great story

id like to read all 3

Definitely do sister's friend.

Sister's Friend

all 3 of them

MILF neighbor next, please.

next stories

Defiantly make all 3 continuations! :) Very, Very, Very good story!!

Mom for sure

next

Please let us read them all three!!

next ones...

If you make it so that Mrs. Raske is the next one, then Mathew can use Mrs. Raske to help seduce the mom. So make it a 4 part series starting with this one, then Mrs. Raske, then the sister's friends, then the mom. The mom coupd be the climax...or you can go further and do the dad too. The friends can help with the dad while Mrs. Raske helps with the mom...or they can all help eachother after you get the dad to get the mom, or get the mom first then use her to get the dad. It would be best if the last one would be the mom, with dad helping them all. You could make it so that they are always trying to get the mom after getting Mrs. Raske but hqve problems getting the mom still, then get the sisters friends who can help out some but have problems, so they seduce dad and then they get her after haveing to overcome smaller difficulties. Knd of like a boss in a video game that you have to kill. Then hwve a few twists in the story so that you can keep readers even more interested, like mom and dad are brother and sister and then youd have a sequel goin to tell the parents story. If you do the dad, have one of the friends suggest it instead of Mrs. Raske or mathew or Sarah. So im thinking it should be Mrs. Raske, then sisters friends, then dad w/ sis friend giving idea, then mom....then maybe a sequel if you want.

A.J.
Ps...dad story start out as getting mom, but fail, then friend thinks of dad and says it would probably help the caause, then go after dad and come back to mom in next one.have challenges become smaller and smaller in each story then big one at end that they overcome in nxt one, or something like that. Will prob keep readers more interested. Hope advice is helpful...migut see comments if mine placed in sporadic places on site. Not saying this is what you should do, just trying to help writers by giving advice and being helpful. But this is what i would do...if i could write that is. Srry for any spelling or grammer errors, not using computer right now, so its hard to correct things. Perfect example...the word "tjings"...damnit!!!!... that took me 15 trys to do it right...then i screwed it up again with the quotation marked one.

Best Present Ever: Sister's Friends

Great story and I believe the follow up with Beth would be awesome. 5 outa 5.

next story

make it beth then milf and mom togather

hot story

awesome hot sexy story. you should do all three additional stories i know i will take great delight in reading them! i would start with beth, then the neighbor then the mom.

next story

friends, then the nieghbor, then the mother would probably be the best

great story

I would like to see the friends, then the MILF, and have his Mom catch him with the MILF and his sister. To where she thinks she wants her some of that.

Friends next then the milf then use the milf to get to mum.

+1 for Bests Present Ever: Sister's Friends

Another excellent story. Keep them cumming ;)

Good story

Sister's friend would be my choice.

Author's Note: Coming soon!!!

Thanks for all the votes and suggestions..part 2...Best Present Ever: Foursome with sister will be out early in 2012!!!

Thanks for all your support!!!

A.I.R. Prize Winner

Congratulations! Your story has been chosen by the men and women who make up the ASSOCIATION of INDEPENDENT READERS as a winner in their 2011 Winter Holiday Contest. An honor that simply reflects and tries to repay you for your great story.

Thanks for taking the time and effort to entertain us. The readers of this site are lucky to have you among us.

Jacqui O, President of the A.I.R.

First story for a virgin reader

Yup! Right after I put mine in, I read yours and then retreated w/ my tail between my wet legs, to lick my imagination into shape.

Great story!

Sister's friend would be mine, but looking forward to them all!

milf

Milf neighbor!

i want to read sisters friends

I think Sister's Friends should be next followed by MILF Neighbor then Mom

so gooood!!,!!!!!

Sisters freind then milf then mother please.

MILF/Friend/Mother

I liked this story, enough to make my first ever comment(and an account to do so), and my opinion on which to do next is the MILF, then Sister's Friend...

Would Mom be another Incest/Taboo Story? (Idk)
Or the story of Ms. Raske seducing thier Mother? (Last, as a side story)

good story

Great story. I would say sister's friends, then MILF, then mom.

Great Story

would love to read in this order : sister's friends, MILF neighbor, and then mom

well done!

Sandra is the sister we all dreamed of "having." great touch to add Beth, the subs and the next door neighbor. great imagination! keep them cumming. can't wait to read what's next.

Doesn't matter , just fuck all of them :)

Part 2 is out

Hi,
Part 2 is finally out and called Cheerleader Orgy and takes place a couple days later with 2 of his sister's friends...and his sister of course!!!

http://www.literotica.com/s/best-presen t-ever-cheerleader-orgy

unbeatable

What can I add? Everyone else has said all I can think of.

So fucking hot

Absolutely fucking sucking wonderful, I am a cunt struck muff diving sex maniac, the more I get the more I want. I just love to get totally drunk on cunt juice, then fuck the girls into next week, also to keep sucking and fucking till we pass out, then to start over. my girl friend and her girl friends will meet up and re-enact this story and enjoy insane levels of sexual pleasure. More and more please and soon, one of the best ever