All Comments on 'Birthday Strip'

Great story, but the ending was a little mean.

I mean, that girl just went through hell. And, after all that, the story ends with her stranded in the woods, naked, about to be hunted like an animal?

Now cassandera you got her in to that mess then left her to fend for her self you new that josh and his friend had seen her had was forcing her to shoe them her body . You left and for got about her all of this is your fault and you trun your back on her just shoes you wearnt realy her friend . But good story but end it in her favor

Started out flying high then crashed into a mountain, unless there is a sequel where she gets revenge this story wasn't worth reading

Started out ok then just got cruel and the ending is dark. This is supposed to be sexual exhibitionist & voyeur material. Not sadistic misogynistic fantasies about making an innocent naked girl suffer only later to be hunted in the woods and possibly killed from what I understood of the ending. This seems more like the first half of a script for some disturbing horror movie.

Well, that was fun.

Enough said.

What the fuck. You started with some ENF, then you went full-speed ahead, no brakes, without looking, into suffering and... I don't even know what to call that. What internal logic does this world you wrote run on where a girl can have friends that set her up for humiliation, completely abandon her, and then let some psychopath shoot her dead like an animal in the woods? Why would any normal person's first thought be "Oh, naked girl just ran off after suffering when she just wanted to do something for some friends. I best shoot her dead" and everyone else says "Okay!" Like... It was almost like you didn't know how to end it, so you just threw all internal consistency of rational character motivation out the window. WTF?