All Comments on 'Timmy Gets a Girl'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Proofread!

defiantly is when someone "defies" someone

definitely is when something is certain, it's "definite"

Spell checkers won't catch irritating errors like this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
curious

Looking to have a first time with a girl like this. I have been come on to by a few, but always scared to follow up. If one is out there in the Atlanta area, give me a call. 4049511615

Caw1992Caw1992over 12 years ago
Cute

Nice ideas but....Your grammar could definitely use some fine tuning. Otherwise cute story man.

rick_ohrick_ohalmost 12 years ago
Good Start

More explicit detail about their eventual coupling would make it a hot story.

ShortyMacShortyMacalmost 2 years ago

Another short but sweet story. I’d like to meet a hot and horny girl like he did doing her laundry. I’d be more than happy to help her with laundry and anything else she needs.

ShortyMacShortyMacalmost 2 years ago

I’d love to have a girlfriend like her. I’d help her with her laundry anytime. I’d love to read more about them.

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