by reynolddd
Action at the end felt a bit rushed, but I'm curious to see where this goes.
Weirdly it seems a lot better this second time I read it, maybe because I read chapter 2 first and it got me interested again
Kinda disliking Mandy and feeling sorry for her boyfriend. As far as she can tell some complete stranger with a big dick shows up out of nowhere and she starts banging him.
hate stories about old men being made young again but I'll look for your work 'you are a good writer from what I've read so far