My Naughty Little Brother

No ...

... thanks

I like the piss but plse leave the shit out.

I love pissplay but shit; no!

your

Fucking sick...

No

more chapters.

A blue-eyed Asian?

How old are you!?

nasty

That was so nasty that I didn't read the whole thing. And which girl could wear panties for three weeks. She would get vaginal infections. I hated it

Nasty

I tried reading this but I couldn't finish. This is just sick and nasty.

You're the reason kids aren't allowed on this site.

Actually, you're probably ONE OF THE KIDS not allowed on this site.

Disgusting

What the fuck is the matter with you? I

You should be banned from posting on this site.

I, too, found it impossible to finish the story.
You're a PIG!

WTF?

Please tell me you are currently ghostwriting writing Herman Cain's new book. That sir is a story that will be giving me nightmares....

nasty

Most disgusting story ever couldn't even finish the story. Ply don't write any more stories

This is just sick!

I didn't even get all the way through this garbage before I scrolled down to leave a comment about how you need to find something else to do with your time. Try computer games, or something, because a writer you ain't!

You need some serious help!

Super gross out factor!
You're an extremely sick and disturbed individual. Please stop writing and admit yourself to a mental hospital.

Rubbish

This story is utter crap,,, didn;t even bother to read to the end,, you are on sick idiot

enjoyed it

I think reading all these nasty comments should make you yearn for a nice one. Here it is. People who read stories here should be ready for bodily functions. It does help to warn them of course. I liked your narrator's total lack of shyness. Some girls are like that. Some never get over staining their panties, either. I found your story predictable but the extremes you included made it a lot more fun. Don't let the nay-sayers discourage you. Try some more.

Baloney_Pony. Did you really say that? You're fucking sicker than the writer.

Who is a naughty girl whose head needs flushing in a filthy toilet while I fuck her tight little ass. having scrubbed it thoroughly with a scouring brush first, of course.

PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! DO NOT WRITE ANY MORE OF ANYTHING!

Those who called it rubbish were being kind! This is pure, unadulterated, disgusting filth! It has no redeeming qualities.

This is disgusting!

You need to delete this story now. It didn't get me turned on, it made me almost puke.

More Please!!

Other than a few spelling errors I found this story quite enjoyable. Please, do not listen to negative comments about your chosen topic, people have a choice whether or not they read it. If you don't like it, don't read it!! Keep up the good work.

More please!!!

I loved this story. It was so hot and so real and raw. I can't wait to hear more!!!

Loved it

Don't listen to others, honestly if Your not into scat and things like this dirty... then you shouldn't even comment, so please go on I loved it

Can I continue this story its still a hot

love it

i wish i was the brother

WTF

(Not in a bad way,) People are squeamish, but some people ultimately like this fetish. Consider boobs (just for a second) to be completely taboo and not accepted at all in society, so the only way to get their fix would be to find another source. IE; Internet. Now replace boobs with scat...and you get the idea. To most, this is gross, disgusting, perverted, and shouldn't even be online. Though, to me, it makes me smile and go on and rub myself. I LOVED the story, but if it's not your cup of tea, don't give it a bad reputation because of it.

Who's complaining about taboo?

I'd say, a most wonderfull story.
Nice plot, some interesting characters and the fact you left the age of the kid out (or I must've read over it) was a rather smart move.
Though a small tip for your next time, try to use more capitals and such, it makes it look more proffessional.
And last but not least, this ain't that much of an evil taboo thing...
I've read worse, I recall reading a story which was tagged for; (It's a long list.)
Femdom, Bdsm, Panty Sniffing, Piss, Incest, Brother-Sister, Pedophilia, Muder, Attempt at murder, torture, death, Pain, and around 200 other taboo's...
Also, nobody actually made a bad comment about it, might be the site though. =P

Hi anon! You're reported for promoting pedophilia. Say goodbye to everything good.

It's a seriously illegal thing to do and isn't taken lightly.

Thanks

Thanks to everyone that supports my work. I am sorry I was not more descriptive in the warning to some of you and I will change that in the future. Sorry I have had no submissions in a while but I am writing a real nasty mother daughter scat story, so if you want more hang in there.

Your nasty

By your nasty i dont mean the insest that is hot, i mean thenastyness you did with the shit piss, and other,who ever you really are you are a sick little gay fuck

my sister tried that with me once but itied her up and made her suck my cock and eat all my cum it was great she also licked my arse and ate sum of my shit too my dicks 13 inches btw ;)

To the anonymous commentator dated 01/24/12, this is just a story. I hope that what you said about your sister is not true because that is definitely not a right (morally and legally) or cool thing to do and can destroy someone’s life.

to do and can destroy someone's life.

ANOTHER CHAPTER!

that was great but why torcher him with crap maybe you should pee in his mouth or something like that.

Amazing!

I love this story, cummed over it 3 times this week! xD

Please add more this is fucking hot

You really should write another chapter of this story. i love to read about hot sisters dominating their brothers. You should turn the brother into a toilet-slave for his sister... Hot story so far..

Ewwwwwwwwww...

I'm a germophobe... EWWWWWWWWWWWW!

Oh Please, yes!

This story definately deserves a follow on! Very exciting!

asshole

now i will never ever sniff another pair of panties again! so gross...

eeeeeeeeeeeewwwwwwwwwwww

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This is all it is 💩

You should aboslutely write a follow up where she uses him as her toilet.. This story made me cum so hard ;)

please make a new one

damn this shit was fucking nice this made me hard while reading the first paragraph. please make a sequel to this story!!!!!!

Great read!!!!!!!!!!!

WOOHOO! Fantastic story! Cheers from the Bayside haha!

Wtf asian dirty bitch

Gay as fck , don't know why asian have blue eye

Another!!!

Made me cum, right another paragraph as I was hard reading this

Ushksudu

Hi im 7

Such a great story. More chapters please !!!!!!

Please make more chapters !!!

Oh Yes

Please write more chapters where you make the brother the slave. And please make him her toilet slave too...

love u both

u r such a nice sister u understand ur brother's hungry