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Ryan & Michelle - The Good Elf

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by Anonymous

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by 11/21/11

Nice Love Story

Well done...

*****

ShrkDivr

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by Artofromance11/21/11

What a wonderful holiday treat!

Call me a sappy romantic, but that story hit all the holiday spots, and was arousing at the same time as thinking 'how sweet'

Excellent job

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by stealthgundam11/22/11

great story...

in a word: PERFECT

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by catman7111/22/11

this made it

Michelle giggled softly and leaned forward to kiss Ryan. "It means my scheming sister's been playing us from the hereafter."

Ryan pushed Michelle onto her back and gave her a deep kiss, far more heated than before. "I wouldn't put it past my granny to give me a not-so-gentle nudge either."

i tend to think that those who are gone are not truly so, just not on this plain of things, so the speed of the romance works in that regard and it is sweet and perfect

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by Mostera111/22/11

Great Story

Very nice, romantic, and erotic. Congratulations on a beautiful Christmas story. Thank you!

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by Anonymous12/02/11

amazing

touching real and still hot and sexy, one of the best stories I have ever read here or anywhere. This story would have stood out even without the sex. Truly brilliant.

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by Chiara2312/03/11

Thank you so much!!!

I greatly appreciate all of the comments and emails I've received. You have all been great! This story just hit me and I had to write it, or more precisely it wrote itself. I am truly grateful for your votes and praise.

Many hugz

Chiara

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by praedar12/03/11

Wow!

Stunningly written. The interactons between the characters are very real and endearing. The romance is rather quick, but seeing that they're both lonely and in need of comanionship it may have been quickened due to that fact.

A very touching and loving story. I hope to see more stories about these two.

Five Stars!!!!

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by exotic13412/12/11

wow

Loved the story - artfully written and great Christmas spirit.

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by horndog_200712/27/11

Incredible

This story is incredible. Wonderfully written. I havent really ventured into the "romance" stories but this one sounded good. I'm glad I did. Great story, great sex!!

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Sweet

That was sweet, although what Michelle should have done when he drove up to her car was call 911.

That wouldn't have done much for the story, though. Hm -- then again, maybe it would.

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by J_RReader12/22/15

wonderfull

Verry romantic, just right for this time of year. I enjoyed reading.

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by Anonymous04/10/16

TOO FUNNY

shelly fucked the shit out of an elf to show her appreciation......

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by Anonymous08/07/16

Wonderful Story

Romantic and sweet

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