This was really different in an interesting way. The whole premise of the girl was such an original idea. Her interacting w/a living human, watching another couple and then hearing her own story, solves her own murder to finally disappear to wherever she was going next.
I hope you continue to write more amazing original storys. I'll be watching!
Please do not stop with just this one story. You have ability to hold ones attention,.I may not have your gift in writing, I love to read. You have used all the elements and some, to keep me reading. I hope to read some more of your writings.
I had the impression from early on that it was a ghost story of some kind, but that transcended my expectations. Wonderfully written, and I look forward to more writing in future!
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