Time for Payback

funny!!!

so far..

so good!. ya gotta keep this going please.

Awesome plot with potential

You just need someone to proofread for spelling and grammar and would be 5 stars easy!
I mean who hasn't wanted:
A) Any of those powers in any form,
B) Getting revenge on those assholes from high school, work, or wherever?

Editing Needed

This could be an incredibly hot story if you had work on the pacing and structuring.

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