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Time for Payback

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by Anonymous

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by sexymomma5705/07/13

funny!!!

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by shipowitts05/09/13

so far..

so good!. ya gotta keep this going please.

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by axisyn05/09/13

Awesome plot with potential

You just need someone to proofread for spelling and grammar and would be 5 stars easy!
I mean who hasn't wanted:
A) Any of those powers in any form,
B) Getting revenge on those assholes from high school, work, or wherever?

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by WitchOfSwords11/01/13

Editing Needed

This could be an incredibly hot story if you had work on the pacing and structuring.

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by timemaster01/07/15

Pictures of Characters at http://www.imagefap.com/profile/timemaster6968

Pictures of Characters from this story at http://www.imagefap.com/profile/timemaster6968. Plus 2 other timestop caption galleries.

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