All Comments on 'Emmi & Her Monster'

good start. wished it was a little longer. a little more sex.

possibly even her getting pregnant or at least wanting him to try to impregnate her.

I LIKE WHERE YOU'RE GOING WITH THIS HOPEFULLY SHE GETS KNOCKED UP.... WONDER WHAT HAPPENS TO THE BOY FRIEND?????

"then I wondered into the kitchen to re-heat a cup" wondered=wandered

"May I touch them?"

"Oh please do, they like to touched softly and fondled."

I never understood this disassociation with breasts from the body. It's like they're suddenly something not attached to the character. "May I touch them?" like they're a fragile figurine on a shelf in the corner of the room.

Thanks for reading, really I wrote this little tid-bit on a whim, so my apologies for any grammatical mistakes (to those who are looking for perfection). Thanks for the comments and Favorite-ing my story. Hope many more people read and comment. Personally I have read pieces here on Literotica that in my opinion could have used a lot more work, plot, characters, punctuation and so forth. So it would seem that most people can overlook a few typos... but hey that's just me.

As for the minotar impregnating her... um maybe next time. lol :D

it was incredible, maybe a continuation?

One thing i'd like to say to one comment - " "May I touch them?" "Oh please do, they like to touched softly and fondled." I never understood this disassociation with breasts from the body. It's like they're suddenly something not attached to the character. "May I touch them?" like they're a fragile figurine on a shelf in the corner of the room."....

SPOKEN LIKE A TRUE MAN!!! ;D anyone with a set of their own breasts or a basic understanding of female anatomy understands. They're rather tender & should be handled with care! Lol

That aside i enjoyed this story & am sad to see there is no follow up. Just as well i suppose. Too many people start off with a good/great stand alone story and draaaaaaaag it out over several boring chapters. This was short and sweet and perfect :D