by dreamykitten2
My submission
I fight it
But
I know I she will have it
Eventually
I understand your poem and can feel where you are coming from. I hope to enjoy.
Great poem. Nice to hear what the other perspective feels in this moment
I crave his voice... I hear it in my head.... all the time.... it is never enough
Being a switch I crave to be him too... this is very erotic..I like I alot.. it sent tingles and shivers.... and much desire to be him for YOU..
passionate fire burning in the eyes,
struggling, fighting a losing battle,
moaning, grunting as sound of inevitable defeat,
that he knows well.
Your poem played with my mind in the most erotic way. It had me daydreaming instantly.
A submissive's greatest dream is to know that he is fulfilling his Mistress' needs. To bow to your control, to endure for your pleasure, nothing can match such things.
MIstress. This is the first erotic poem I have read that I enjoyed. It also aroused me. I would moan and beg for you.
You'd certainly have no problem obtaining my submission.
I do like this one, but not nearly as much as the last one. It was entertaining but for some reason it just didn't jump out at me with that wow factor.
"I crave it"
"it's like a drug"
"Insatiable"
You're addicted, aren't you?
Very hot!!! Thans for this.
I enjoyed this poem because I felt connected to it; like I was there and that it was part of me somehow. I could feel you in this.