All Comments on 'His Submission'

My submission

I fight it

But

I know I she will have it

Eventually

I like this poem very much.

I understand your poem and can feel where you are coming from. I hope to enjoy.

I can imagine a sweet surrender to you

Great poem. Nice to hear what the other perspective feels in this moment

a wonderful poem mistress :)

I crave for it!!

I crave his voice... I hear it in my head.... all the time.... it is never enough

I did not mean to post anonymously...

Being a switch I crave to be him too... this is very erotic..I like I alot.. it sent tingles and shivers.... and much desire to be him for YOU..

Submit for her.......

passionate fire burning in the eyes,

struggling, fighting a losing battle,

moaning, grunting as sound of inevitable defeat,

that he knows well.

Your poem played with my mind in the most erotic way. It had me daydreaming instantly.

and erotic!

I want to be your sub Mistress. I want you hear me moan and beg

A submissive's greatest dream is to know that he is fulfilling his Mistress' needs. To bow to your control, to endure for your pleasure, nothing can match such things.

MIstress. This is the first erotic poem I have read that I enjoyed. It also aroused me. I would moan and beg for you.

You'd certainly have no problem obtaining my submission.

I do like this one, but not nearly as much as the last one. It was entertaining but for some reason it just didn't jump out at me with that wow factor.

favorite line....

total mind fuck ! wow ! ;-)

I resemble that remark...*wink*

"I crave it"

"it's like a drug"

"Insatiable"

You're addicted, aren't you?

Very hot!!! Thans for this.

I like the directness, it is powerful

I enjoyed this poem because I felt connected to it; like I was there and that it was part of me somehow. I could feel you in this.

A total mind fuck your words can do to one!!!! :) Grinningecko

If I could change his to hers, it would be perfect!

Great job again, I'm so impressed with your writing.

Very simple and to the point, yet elegant.

Very nice......Very well written!