All Comments on 'Coffee'

Dude, this is great stuff......I love the ending:

"I remember

how your steam

deep and rich

at weary dawn

rolled into my nostrils

(I breathed you so deeply,

a gulping, starving man)

and revived

my parched

heavy head."

sleepslow fingers? perfect

paced contemplatively, ripe with offerings of sound, colour, movement, passion and bitter dark chocolate afternotes - typo 'girls' but to be fair you had me at 'sleepslow fingers'. also the 'sandy cartwheels', 'shaky vernacular', 'indonesian dockside bags/cascading beans' and the mother hushing the child 'far inland'.

i love this write and so must favourite it. great job!