Stealing My Heart

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wilie...could it be infiltrated? lol
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Ok, I really think it was a great start. I didn't expect much when I saw how short it was but I have to say you put a lot of details in and even began to develop the characters. A great first try. Look forward to the rest.

wooowww

it's amazing even for a short chapter.

Not bad

I'm reminded of a line from an old Tom Lehrer song: "In that moment of truth, I suddenly knew... / That someone had stolen my wallet!"

Still, a fun and original premise, and I think I'll read the rest of the story (5 chapters as I write this). On a more critical note, you definitely need an editor. Your technical skills need work and your prose is a bit awkward. Not at all bad for a first attempt, though! :)

Enjoying this! Please continue!

Smoothly

Done, continue please?

Holy...wow. Just wow. I'm enjoying already, and it has barely started. Bro/Sis, you got talent.

Wow just wow

Amazing especially since this is ur story. Can't wait to read more

great first chapter!

can't wait to read more :)

so far so good

Love it .... On to the next chapter :)

:)

This is a great start to a story, very unique. I can't wait to read the next installment in this story.

Beautiful beginning

Unfinished story alert!!!

Beware!! For this has no end............

No ending,

Another NO ENDING story,so unless you just want to waste time reading,,,dont bother....a great story,,,what there is of it..such a shame..

Well its back = at least in May 2014! Hurrah :)

I remember reading this story the first time around, but I can't remember how far I got. Am gonna enjoy reading up to Ch5 and then hope it gets updated again!!! Soon!

I'm hooked already.....

Just saw a posting today under NonHuman for chapter 7. I don't know how I missed this story, but it seemed interesting, so I thought I'd give it a go. I'm glad that I did. So now I'm going to carry on and read all the other chapters, and then add it to my favourites list. :)

Wonderful start

A nice slow start, with a brush of who we are dealing with. Nice.

Great start!

similar story

I have read similar story in wattpad... r u d same writer

Cliche

There are too many cliches, that it's boring.

This story is from 2011, when is wattpad story date?

@ mystical penguin; carefull with the copying from wattpad claim, since this story is well written and the characters are adults. The wattpad werewolf "formula" is a story written by a teen girl who can't write or spell and has high school characters as alphas and lunas.

Thrilled to see this update!

This story was briefly on wattpad but it was removed because it had been plagiarized. I was the person who discovered it and contacted Greenly. This is the original version.

Love this story. Lost count how many times I read it.