Love it! Can't wait for more!
Just lovely! Hope there's more soon! ;)
I love the buiding romance between Zach and Leo. Please don't make us wait too long for the next chapter.
The pain of having you cherry popped and the after effects. Feels good when it's happening but Isn't all roses and sparkles afterwards.
I love the relationship that is building between Zach and Leo. Please keep writing this story!!
If you think for one minute you can leave the story there mister - you got another think coming! Fantastic story. I am usually the one always commenting to let the writer be and be patient - but this time ........WRITE FASTER MISTER! Way too many open lines to not follow up! I'll be waiting - impatiently.
NOW I WANT MORE NOW...... COME ON DUDE GET THAT BRAIN OF YOURS GOING AND GIVE US WHAT WE WANT....... loved it
...but yes, you must get a move on with the next installment! What I liked best was the detail in the sex. It brings out the wonder and beauty of men's bodies, things that only a man can understand and appreciate.
HOT!!! the way you are building it has left me wanting and needing more...
my seal, the eclipse...
WE FUCKING NEED MORE
Please finish this story. It's so good.
I agree please finish this story.
Zach and Leo have a warm and loving relationship, and saying "I love you" to each other brings it all to a head. They really love each other, and fit together so well. I love the chest hair on Leo, and Leo is so good at helping Zach -- and Leo has brought Zach so far with that compassion. Keep the story going. More loving!
When we´ll get to read more of this wonderful masterpiece? :)
Great story so far
Omg I am loving this story I hope there is more to cum
I loved Scorched earth and a full moon on Gay authors so much, i was pleasantly surprised to find you had even more stories on literotica. Keep writing bro. Your stories are awesome. (especially Scorched earth. That was just bloody beautiful.)
Cock, penis, cum... are great words for erotica. Dong is for snickering children who giggle when they mention a penis. Total mood killer. The story however is great and makes up for the immaturity. Great story and characters. Now I'll try and read the next chapter to see if my pee pee wakes wup.
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