All Comments on 'I Thirst'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
wrong gnere

try the nonhuman section

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
well...

if its root cause is science based, this would be the proper category, however, know that if it turns into a "cum vamp" type story with more focus on the vamp and no "sciency" stuff instead, it would be better fit for the nonhuman category

that all being said, it was rather hot, but SHORT and RUSHED, other then that, if you take the time to develop your story more, detail the sexual scenes and even some inbetween (and yes, that sexual scene was god awful dismul compared to what I think you could have done with it), then you have the making of being both a great author AND a great story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Well written

Very good, is there more? Well written and thought out, this could turn into a very interesting idea

jonmartin22jonmartin22over 12 years ago
cool

Nicely done ufpe, I very much enjoyed it..

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Mmmm

great story keep it going please,great take on the vampire.

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