Keep it coming, I can't wait for the next chapter, I have a feeling it's going to be interesting.
Glad to be catching up because I don't have to wait for chapter 3. It's already here and I'm headed there right now!
For the second time, I am hooked. There was a long block of someone's monologue where it was hard to read. You can break up dialogue into paragraphs too.
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Keep it coming, I can't wait for the next chapter, I have a feeling it's going to be interesting.
Glad to be catching up because I don't have to wait for chapter 3. It's already here and I'm headed there right now!
You sure know how to write an ending!
For the second time, I am hooked. There was a long block of someone's monologue where it was hard to read. You can break up dialogue into paragraphs too.
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