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I SEE MORNERS NOT NOONERS
and with the planned power failure frequently. TK U MLJ LV NV
Damn Fine
Good story, good premiss, fine writing.
Thanks
Toylover
This was pretty good
Thanks for the story, 5 stars
Yeah, me too...5*
Nice story.
Rare
to find a story about spouses being hot for each other in this site.
liked the story but.....
The writing screamed "Sexually callenged teen with a penthouse and a thesaurus." So you will delete this and call me an asshole. You can't erase the 2 I gave you for crappy style douche boy.
Thanks to everyone for the crazy voting and praise.
To the Anon: Thanks, right on the nail. If it hadn't been for all those negative comments about that same notion, on other stories in this cat, I would never have come up with the idea for this. I have never been married, but I can see the greatness in it. I don't plan a sequel for this one, but I have some other ideas for this cat.
Just some FYI: There are repetitive words for a reason, they were meant to mimick the 'same old' feeling of marriage (ha) and make the dialogue pop. This story was also much longer in it's original form, but I condensed it when I thought of the title.
WE LOVED IT and we didn't think it was either sexually or grammatically 'callenged'
like the pedantic commenter above!!! Great writing kid!
We gotta fly cos mommy's waiting for us in another category!!
cuckeye007 n' saxon_fart.
Crafted well and smooth!!
The tension between them was delightful and brought back memories of times when "the power failed" in our house as well. You never can tell, it may happen tonight.
Again.
Thank you.
"If you don't like it, don't read it."
How is a person supposed to know if they like it without reading it?
Good stuff
Sneaky bastard.
looks like Random
finally got his creampie
' Challenged '
I love it when some whinger trips over his/ her own feet.
Cheers,
Kilroy.
Well...he can have his wife
and when they both lose their jobs and are living on the street, he won't have to share her with that pesky job. Of course, they'll be living in soup kitchens and homeless shelters but Fuck it, he'll have his wife.
RE: 'challenged' comment
"I love it when some whinger trips over his/ her own feet".
Kilroy, what's a whinger?
Fumbling fingers can be fun.. especially the kind that slip in the shower...
well
That's one way to recapture the magic. It's better than cheating.
That was enjoyable.
Different, well-constructed, and fun. A good story.
A damn fine story
Not the usual LW story with cheating, revenge, hatred and other non-erotic crap.
Very well written with an erotic plot. A great way to have spouses reconnect, plus she will be even sharper at work because her personal life is in balance.
Thanks for writing.
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