Anger Management

lovd it

The cucks and wimps are going to hate this story. 5 stars

NEVER EVER GET TOO MAD BEFORE YOU GET EVEN

and then go balls to the walls. TK U MLJ LV NV

#2 FOR H dog

HAVE YOUR CONSIDERED AN EPILOG OR SEQUEL FROM THEIR SIDE OF THE FIASCO. TK U MLJ LV NV

5 stars

Woof Woof !! Don't play in my yard or mess with my bitch says the dogg. Nice counter balance to the far afield cuck BS plaguing LW.

My Gawd, Sex AND VIOLENCE!!!

Just doesn't get any better! What a fun fairy tale, without the faeries.

damn

as someone says revenge couldnt get much better than this ..except his ex doesnt seem hurt to bad she is out of jail...he did get the kids while she was being butch for 5 years didnt he...really they all desered to die them n her

push

Good story
You push someone hard enough ,they are going to push back. This all could have been avoided if she had confronted him and askeded what happen at the part

quentin tarantino comes to LW :)

5 stars.

You mean to tell me.........

This guy didn't sit there and flog the bishop while his wife was getting fucked? He didn't beg to clean her up when the gangbang was over? He didn't ask the other guys to knock her up so he could raise another guy's child? What is this story doing on LW? I thought wimps and cucks ruled this hub, so that's why I gave you 5 starz. It's so refreshing to see a protag with balls and spine on here. He needs to send Mark pix of Karen killing him slowly. Great story!!!

Funny!

I would recommend an editor change, but who cares, the story was a lot of fun, and very entertaining. We need and epilogue where Hank brings his and Karen's child in to visit the inmates. LOL

Thank you sir, may I have another!

Crappy story, just rude

No good characters in this story, no reason, no love, no emotions, no tension, just raw ranting and "wannabe jokes".
2*

Well done as a story

But I could not bring myself to really believe in the revenge or the better life that our hero found. Personally I thought that Headhunter had much more useful ideas.

A Funny Little Revenge Tale

But you really do need to consider switching editors. The lack of dialoge and structure of the story were very jarring, and made it a much less enjoyable read.

Heartless and a bastard

You are. but i agree, nobody should sit there and be a doormat.

Outstanding

I loved it! More please!

there is one good thing about this

How many times have we read over the years about wife THINKING their hsubands were cheating then tying them up and torturing them and NO criminal charges are ever pressed ..

finally someone writes a story where that does NOT happen

Good story.

It makes a change to have the husband have balls and not give up his manhood unlike most stories in this category, as for how the story was written? don't worry I am sure he will get better. Keep writing Huedog and thanks for the story.

Good one

Straightforward. He didn't cry or wonder why. He also realized that he had to use the law in his favor. He waited until the right time for payback of the other kind. It was a good twist to video the party. A DUI here will get you a night in jail to sleep it off. The pain starts the next day. The loss of the drivers license for six months. High priced insurance for three years and court costs. It happened to a friend of mine recently, he figures it will cost about seven grand. Ouch.

Lol - WTF. Harry gives grudging albeit back handed praise to Huedogg !

Wellll now ,they MUST be playing hockey in Hell. Well the premise of this story is manure. I resent very much that I enjoyed this crude story . I hate doleing out five stars to such a common , mean spirited saga .

I fear for the future of this earth if we don't learn the qualities of forgiveness & unconditional love. Most of all I hate how much I loved reading how all the castles is sand falling to the vengeful sea.

All I'm sure of, is in fact, is that Edward Norton should play the narrator with Godsmack & Rage Against The Machine provide the soundtrack.

Not getting a vibe really on the gullible, slut wife ...maybe Eva Mendes. NO I GOT IT ! Jessica Simpson if she can't play dumb - no one can.

Not too good

Need to flesh out the story a lot. Was more a story outline than a completed product.

Funny Read!!!!

Damn! you told a book load in one page. Thanks for a great story I like your writing style.

I think I might have anger issues too!

Great story
. I loved the ending. Everybody got what they deserved. Loved it. Five all the way.

Hilarious story

I love how he calmly and meticulously rips them apart, not only legally, which was very refreshing, but also physically. And the best thing is, he never gets angry. He has it managed quite well.

I do have to wonder about his choice of friends. Five assholes that would fuck him over to screw his wife and then beat him up as well. Wow!

A fun read

I think that every story requires some suspension of belief on the part of the reader. How much suspension is forgiven depends on the quality of the piece. This story has many, many, unrealistic elements. However, the degree to which I can enjoy a tale even though many aspects may be too fanciful has much to do with the visceral buttons the author uses to manipulate me. It’s called satire to some.

On a purely technical level I totally agree with K.K. This is another one of those “Hildy” variants that have been rewritten numerous times. And yes, the editor overlooked so many typos, missing words, and wrong tenses that he should be replaced.

All that having been said…I thoroughly enjoyed this story. It was a hoot!

I simply put this in that category reserved for guilty pleasures, works that make me a little ashamed that I like them, but provide me enjoyment nonetheless. A good fantasy revenge story is always fun to read.

I'm wondering what story some critics read and then left comments here.

Hd2,

Very clear concise and conclusive. Reap what you sew. Your Hero reaped the best.

Good Family first, loyal friends second, the good woman comes first and you follow. Whats not to like about that? Some commenter's need to pet their cat, button up their cardigan ( a lonely life is cold ) and smell their Rosebuds. ((Rosebuds are the anal creases at the base of the rectum))

The best comment was "properly managed anger" and I agree.

Thanks for sharing on Lit.


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K.K. hit it on the head.

I counted at least three stories in here. Inlcuding the Prison scene about murding the husband. Except in the other story it was the new Italian girlfriend and the ex wife who was cheating with a car dealer.
The reason I don't write a story is because everytime I try to come up with one I do the same thing. My ideas all seem to be parts of various stories.

To me that shows the true talent of some of the authors here. You have to be creative to write a good story.

Thank to you guys for your comments

If you have read my stories, you know there right to the point. My favorite authors are Starstang06, papatoad, and x John doe x, I also like nakdsub, FD45, and believe or not Matt Monroe. Everytime I read a Matt Monroe story, it just pisses me off to no end. That how you know he got his point across. It like JPB, you either love him or you hate him. They are all great writers. I like their styles, but we all can't be that great. Me I like when the slut/cheating bastard gets theirs In the end. As you can tell I hate cuckold. Nakdsub is a good RAAC writer, I enjoy a good tear jerker, but that not me. That why I like to read his stuff. To me StarStang and Papatoad are the best here, hand down. I hate cuckolds, and cheating sluts. I'm glad you guys enjoyed it. Thanks

A HOPE AMANDA BECOMES A BIG BUTCH LESBIANS BITCH AND GETS BEAT UP EVERY DAY AND HIS EXE MATES GET HUMPED OF BIG BLACK MEN EVERY DAY OR COMMITT SUICIDE THIS IS HOW TO DEAL WITH A SLUT

Hey there Huedogg

Personally I liked this story, I think mainly because it's so different from other stories that appear in the LW section. The good guy won and the bad guy lost, to me that is the point of these stories, as for mentioning my name in the same sentence as Papatoad and StangStar, well let's just say I will never be as good as them, but thank you for the mention, as for your writing style? well it's your story and you should be able to write it how you see fit, so you keep writing and I will keep reading.

Regards

JD

Great Great Great!

Please keep up the good work. It gives wimps like me hope.

Of all the plots on literotica, I think the one where the wife ties up the husband and makes him watch her get gangbanged is the least likely.

The husband is always completely innocent and the wife madly in love with her husband, but incredibly jealous. For me to buy this the author would have to go to great lengths setting the stage. Here he doesn't. Try this with one of your friend's wife: Tell her her husband has been unfaithful and ask her if she wants to get some revenge by gangbanging you and some friends. As a bonus, you'll tie her husband up and make him watch. She'd probably call the cops--on you.

#2 1 DOWN 5 TO GO

depends on how you count. TK U MLJ LV NV

i love this story

no it never happens that way; but hell it is a good read. bad guys/gals get beat, good guys/gals get the - - well you know what they get; hell an all around good read.

Ok call me crazy but I liked it

It's like a fantasy park ride. Good fun, but then you return to real life.

Heartless bastard? Are you kidding me?

Man, there's absolutely nothing heartless or bastardly about revenge. In fact, the more over the top it is, the better I like it. Great story.

Good!

Okay, I'll admit it it. It was as over the top as you can get. The characters were damn near full on stereotypical to the point of comedic. There was an overall sense of coarseness to the whole story as well. What the hell, I loved it anyway. It's a fiction piece. It's not intended to be (in my opinion) taken too seriously, it's to entertain the reader. As singer Cyndi (Loopy) Lauper so aptly quoted, "If you're too serious, you die of starch."

There were a few minor grammatical errors along the way and that was the only thing that kept me from giving it the full five stars. The husband and brother's outrageous response to his wife and erstwhile "friend's" equally outrageous assault when he was completely innocent of any wrongdoing demanded all out revenge, with no quarter asked or given. That is the very scenario the author delivered us. Well done, and a well deserved four stars.

thanks for the great feedback

I can see from some of your comments you don't like my writing style, we life goes on. For those who like them thanks for your support and robinflatchest, if you can't beat em' join em'. So I'll be waiting on your stories to come.

Yeah

Great revenge.
I thought I posted on this story once but I guess not. Oh well

Well Done!

very simple and elegant.
Who need friends and wife like this one.
Just burn the beach and all her "friends"

i liked it. have you ever thought about doing some chain stories?

LMAO

Loved it, something different and just want the Doctor ordered. Well done!

Ah yes, the old battery acid in the balls trick...

That hurts just to read about it.

Gotta give you your props -

Nice job -

Not an nuclear revenge, not uncontrolled, not too contrived -

Considered and smart - a couple of "you got lucky dude" moments with the judges but still OK -

Thanks -

I enjoyed it again.

I reread this one after reading your newest story. This one is still my favorite of your submissions. There are a few spelling and usage errors that could be easily corrected. How about if you send me your next story before publishing and I will help you fix some of those little problems. I am a retired language arts teacher,

Hmmmmmm

OMG.........

you need a better editor

The amount of typos, missed words, and syntax errors that slipped past your editor are telling me that you need a new one, or at the very least you need to not give said editor credit at the end of the story.

fuck the psuedo 3rd grade english teachers - this was a perfect story.

Since it was already in favorites I must have read it before.

My kind of guy, he definitely did the right thing. I would have seen to it that Amanda gor hurt some, too, in a physical way. The prison time was not quite enough.

I will try to read all your other stories, too. Thank you for writing.

Hell Yeah

That's the way to go about things

I just read Anger Management 2

Huedogg2, that was one fucked up, funny story. Damn dude, battery acid. Then what he did to his wife is fucked up.....Why didn't you post it here to? It's only on SOL.