Nice start. Keep going.
I agree, short and too the point. Well written too. I could see each scene unfold as if I were right there. I'll look forward to your second installment.
You've got the knack. Keep it up.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Very well done. I read in the forum you do this as an "exercise"? Wow! Keep it up, I'll be watching for more from your pen!
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A little short
Nice start. Keep going.
Sweet!
I agree, short and too the point. Well written too. I could see each scene unfold as if I were right there. I'll look forward to your second installment.
Great Job!
You've got the knack. Keep it up.
Nice Quickie
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Loved the quickie.
Very well done. I read in the forum you do this as an "exercise"? Wow! Keep it up, I'll be watching for more from your pen!
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