All Comments on 'Rhythm and the Blue Line Ch. 03'

Nothing like that first kiss. :-) These two are cute and I enjoy their constant denials of "we're not dating!" They won't be able to keep that up forever!! Loving it, my friend. Can't wait for more.

Everyone else can see they are good together and that there is the possibilty of more and yet the two of them had been saying nope nothing and then Ryan gives over and letsw the fates have thier way to see where and what will happen between them :) Never nice first real kiss between them great ch as always!

... but this time with a feisty musician. Fine romantic story!

this story is about of a perfect romantic story as one can get i love the nice slow progression of the relationship you have between the two of them it is sweet and highly romantic i am looking forward to reading the rest of this most excellent story

Penn Lady is the best writer currently working on Lit. She just writes the most perfect romances and creates deeply-drawn characters. OK, she does have a hockey fetish, but I think she can be forgiven for that.

Good story. Keep going please.

I love this story so far I have read all of pennladys and mugsyb stories and have waited sometimes impatiently to here a story about Brody. I have not been disappointed and can't wait to read more about these two. Also can't wait to see what would happen if Brody met ryans family.

I like both of the characters. The way they're interacting, the way the whole story is coming together. It's a GOOD read! I love it. Keep it up.

Dave

absolutely awesome story with a pair of great characters looking forward to reading more about them and am a big fan of the way you write.

Thank you

Love your stories! And I don't mind the hockey fetish! Actually got me interested in watching some hockey! lol Can't wait for more of the story!

Just like I've been saying, I knew i was going to love Broday's story :) You are an amazing writer and I can't wait to read more!

I just love when I finish reading a chapter with a smile on my face! Can't wait for the next chapter and wondering what kind of trouble Jason is going to cause. Love the banter between Brody and Ryan.

~S

Please don't leave this one unfinished it's in my top 10 for sure. I love both characters and all the minor characters in this story. I'm very impressed with your writing skills. Ive read around 500 literotica stories. This is one of those stories that keeps me looking for more stories. Thank you, keep going...

Love those two. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Please update soon! I love this story and these characters!

very very good story can't wait until it heats up

It makes for a nice pleasant love story. As always, you deliver a great storyline with little to no errors. The only complaint is the length between chapters, but that's life. Keep up the great work! Bring Mugsy back with her stories too ;)

are you holding back her best argument?

The best argument she has for not dating is that it would mean that her family would start to pay attention to her. Not because of her but because she's dating a pro hockey player. That would be devistating to her.

Laughted out loud at "They're whole-grain chips, I swear." I am really enjoying these.