All Comments on '"Best Wife Ever!" 12 Days of Sexmas'

FYI the first day of Christmas is Dec 25 or 26 depending. It ends on Jan 5 or 6.

I really enjoyed this sexy Christmas yarn - well done, silkstockinglover - 5 *s.

To anonymous, I've only ever known Christmas Day to be the 25th - the 26th is Boxing Day in England, St Stephen's Day, and it used not to be celebrated in Scotland - but Christmas Day is/was/always will be December 25 - unless you're an Orthodox Christian, when it comes a few days later; even so, the festival is pretty well 'harmonised' by now.

Best wishes to you both - it's too early for Christmas greetings!

Great story- ignore comments about 12 days of Christmas etc, I take your 12 days as the build up the the anal on Christmas Day, the 25th December, not the 12 days of Christmas that follows as per that awful song, there again maybe another year you could write a story based around that!

Good luck with the competition!

Bob

Not that it matters for the story. Good job.

Ah to have a wife like her.....

xx

and boring read. Not worth the waste of my time to read.

Damn that was hot!

This was no story, just a long and tedious outpouring of sexual encounters. You normally write better than this. Here you just seemed to give up plot and conflict.

Not your best by a long way.

No one in an exciting marriage would call this boring or in any way out of the realm of possibility! The heat in this story is its sense of reality and imagining it happening with me and my spouse! neat!

A slutty wife and husband story. I love that there were no other parties involved. She and "Silkstockingslover" deserves a great Christmas present.

Do women like Alexis really exist? I hope so, but I never met one that even came close.

Please, please, please, start a class for wives on how to create exciting situations like this.

the World's Best Wife!

Loved it. Can't wait to check out the rest of your stories.

What praise, by lack of flames about the category! You obviously so well entertained these hard butts failed to complain you put this in the wrong category...and with this audience that is high praise indeed!

A woman who actually does not exist. Great Fantasy. She actually not only enjoyed it, she agressively went after it and loved loving her husband. Refreshing for this catagory. But still, if this is based on a real woman, could you at least post her picture or better wrtie another story about her.

Firstly, 5 star restaurants don't serve "nacho cheese dip and tortilla chips." I know you meant for them to be at a nice restaurant, thus adding to the naughtiness of what she was doing, but... Yeah, that's a bit of a glaring irregularity.

That said, not bad. My first thought when I saw what category this belonged to I was waiting for the other cuckold/cheating wife shoe to drop (FYI I don't consider girl-girl to really being "cheating."), but this made for a nice change of pace: a husband and wife who love and are in love with each other, not the typical misogynistic "my wife is a lyin', cheatin whore who will fuck any cock but mine, so I'm gonna divorce her, leave her penniless, with a million STDs and a whore for some abusive black guy."

That said, I thought the 12th day of Christmas should have been a 3-way with Jenna; there is obviously something going on between the wife and the very dom Jenna.

Now this is how a couple stays together! Personally i enjoy the mandatory fashiOn shows i enjoy after Vic Secret arrives, she only wears what i buy, plus heels. I criticism though, no way he doesn't enquire as to whether she really got it on with her girlfriend, curiousity killed the cat but satisfaction brought him back.

That was a very hot and pretty realistic story. I would love a follow-up to the "wait till you see what I have planned for New Years" comment. Here's hoping it involves her hot co-worker!

Very entertaining read. Nice to have a story in Loving Wives that actually involves a loving wife and husband. This hit nearly all my fantasies. I plan to send link to my wife so she can enjoy your story. I hope you win first place in the contest.

I may start to enjoy the holidays now. Especially if my bitch was this creative.

Women like this do exist...Trust me, once had one who was very imaginative in a very similar fashion, maybe a little more!

Great story, 'softer' than some of the others...Looking forward to that 'Bedding the Babysitter' new yrs special :-)

To all who question if women like this exist...well...the story is based on things I have mostly done...nine of the twelve days are mostly true...u can use your imagination to guess which three are not...although I do have plans to make one of the final three a reality thiks Christmas!!!

Jasmine

This is a great story. I hope that my future wife will give me a present like this sometime. i really hope that you will make the New Year's Eve story as well.

Please please please write about new years

A masterful story SSL. Well written, highly erotic, love the PH fetish, and the love they shared. What a worthy holiday entry! A beautiful TLW story. Love to see more TLW's, and PH stories, with footjobs. Superb! This made me forget the troubles for a littke while.

Thank you!

M1

I was really expecting the 12th day to be Alexis and Jenna with hubby. Oh well, maybe the New Years party will bring Jenna and Alexis together.

Great job of inspiring images over 12 days - never a dull moment!

I deducted 1* for the anal sex.

5* for covering all bases...holes.

This one of your best works yet cant wait to read New Years event

The tease, the tension, the anticipation, then the sex. So good. Please do another one for new years. You are the best.

Such a pleasure to read a great love story that also has plenty of lust!

It was really hot

If you make a new years one you should include a 3 sum with her best friend

So difficult to keep the interest and variation going when there's a series of "events" - so well done!

I agree with the suggestion to include Jenna.

That was terrific, you kept my interest had had me wondering what would come next!

Brilliant. Superbly constructed. Your style makes for such easy and horny reading. That was fun, playful, witty, charming, erotic and incredibly sexy. Loved every word.

According to the story, they have sex on monday morning before work.

On tuesday evening, while he's at the hotel, and they're having phone sex, while she's being eaten by Jenna, the story says

"Aaaaaaah," she screamed, clearly coming. I was right behind her as I shot a load of cum all over myself a few seconds later.

She heard my grunt and moaned, "You coming too, baby?"

This indicates that she came during the call on tuesday.

However, when he returns two days later the story says

She moaned, "I haven't come since the last time your cock was in me."

So, according to the story, they had sex monday morning, and she claims she didn't cum until thursday evening, but it also says she came tuesday evening.

I wonder if this is a simple oversight on the part of the author, or if it is intentional that the wife is lying to him.

Also, maybe it's just me, but I couldn't shake the feeling that she's cheating on him. I simply could not enjoy this story.

By the way, bicycles have 'pedals', flower have 'petals'.

WOW! great story, don't stop

Definitely great, especially the stretching out of the days. I'd like to see a sequel, and a story with Jenna.

Very good...extremely erotic. One of your best!

A very hot story !! And to the people who catch 'petal versus pedal' and are turned off, wow you have no erotic bones in your body.

I did notice the thing about her seemingly coming on the phone but claiming not to have come since he left. And I came to two conclusions: 1) she was fibbing on the phone for his benefit, or 2) she was fibbing when he returned to make him hotter. Either is acceptable, in my book.

And I see where you got the implication that she might be cheating on him, but I think it's pretty clear that she isn't. Her and another woman is clearly a fantasy that he has, even if it's one that he hasn't been great about acknowledging or sharing with her before the story begins. The implication that I got was that she was teasing him with the idea that she might be sleeping with these other women, which wouldn't be cheating anyway as he only ever expresses concern over sharing her with another man and over him straying towards another woman. It's a turn-on for his benefit, not her finding passion with a stranger outside of their relationship.

A very romantic and hot story

True love, that is! To those who think "loving wives" always means "cheating wives", expand your horizons a bit. The best sex can actually be experienced within a marriage. What a concept!

Hugh Jackman is English?

Born Australia - English parents.

Wow, that was a fun story, I wish my wife would surprise me like that!

Well done.

Wow! I obviously need lessons.

I have to agree with your title "Best Wife Ever!", which indeed she was. It was refreshing to see a mature loving couple acting life wanton teenagers. I've been there and I related well to this story. Their doting loyalty mutual respect and admiration came boldly forth. The sex was great buy it meant so much more seeing what underpinned their effort, which the author pulled off masterfully. I rated this 5 stars. I'm disappointed that I read this outside of the contest deadline but you obviously deserved to win. Your are a fantastic writer and I am on a crusade to read all your works. Again, thank you for a wonderful story.

Great story. I give it 5 stars, not one star. Coded wrong. Keep up the great stories.

Love her stories they all excite me. I would love to see a copy of this short story on my wifes nightstand.

A good porn story, very enjoyable.

If you were only able to photo illustrations Just like "Stocking Tales" Office

Submission. ( using real models) this story would have been really something,

I"m sure all your other readers appreciate,

Looking forward to reading/ seeing photo illustration stories in the future.

Simply one of the very best stories on Lit.

Wow, is your wife hot and horny. Also nice to read a story that's not about some cuckold getting sloppy seconds.

hot and erotic wit touch of romance really one of the best ever read!!

You must have a sequel to this story since it is totaly amazing. Great story and great writer. It is one of the best eroticas I have ever read. Bravo!

You either have a very vivid and erotic loving imagination or lived the real live of this couple to tell a story like this. One thing though, I still thought the redhead waitress or Jenny will join on the act in one of the Sexmas days. Maybe on new year!

Thanks for the reminder of just how good life can be for a couple who seek each others pleasure more than their own.

VERY Sorry to have to remind everyone that driving after drinking is more likely to lead to terrible regrets than home. Sad but true. Get a taxi please.

Best wishes for many more "Happy Christmas" events

The story is great, write more stuff like this. And add some wild, humiliation, submission theme to it.

Thanks

One incredible turn on and I'm thinking New Years Eve is a threesome either with Jenna or Samantha. Maybe even a fourgie

I hope you do the New years eve story I really loved this and so did my wife, she is think about doing this now for this year.

Very nice. I hope there's more to come.

I loved the humorous dialogue to go with all the great sexual situations. This one is really good. I can think of several situations that could and maybe should come in a sequel but that is certainly up to you and your creativity.

Can't wait for New Year's eve and Jenna! Enjoyed your story...good dialog

I wish my wife was as sexy & do things like that.

Great Story. The final "gift" very special. Perfect. Really enjoy how your mind works.

Loved everything about this story! My third grade teacher was nothing like Alexis! (I don't think,anyway.) Lots of great Sexmas gifts without getting too far out there with whips,strap-ons,and the like. (More believable than some of the stuff I've been reading.) One thing that I was waiting for which, was hinted at early, was a three-way with Samantha,the sexy waitress at the restaurant. I was slightly disappointed when it didn't happen,but then again,they were a horny couple who were in love with each other.A third person would have compromised/weakened that strong theme in this story. ~ One other thing that bothered me slightly,but it really wasn't of importance in this story,was Alexis coming home shit-faced at 4 in the morning after going out bar-hopping with her horny girlfriends.I know that the couple is madly in love,BUT bad things happen to drunk,horny women in the wee hours,and it was stated by hubby that Alexis gets foul-mouthed and naughty when drunk. That sounds like a recipe for disaster. ~Would love to see another story with the further happy sexcapades of this couple!

That's a masterpiece. Great story. Enjoyed a lot. Thanks for writing.

I love stories of loving wives with no cheating and no showing everybody her pussy, No sharing. Thank you for an excellent story 5 stars

You want to be married to bat-shit-crazy? Knock yourself out. Next stop - Divorce Court.

I wish I had a wife like that!!! Maybe a return story for their anniversary or her birthday? But this definitely needs a 2nd chapter. Well done!

Loved this, one of your best SSL, but you need to write a follow-up, with her horny friend joining in. However, her husband is one lucky guy, having a sexy bitch like her.

Much amusing to read!! I totally have some new great ideas for I to pleasure my husband. Great love you have & sex! I sure hope you planned her "12 days". :)

Yes, she must be the best wife ever. She is very gifted, and gives pleasurable gifts. How considerate, hot, sexy, and horny.

I received a number of gifts too... though not directly from her. Hope there is a sequel, the New Years Even event she has planned...

Thanks You for great erotic writings

SSL, Jasmine, thanks, loved it and I am sure there is more from her to him but what about a follow up that is his 12 days to her? How would he top that? What would he do for and to her - new toys? Her friend Jenna? Offer her his ass for pegging? Plenty of scope I think!

Skinnysinner

X

A crazy but enthralling story

Please write many more stories I always enjoy reading them... Great writer. Merry Christmas.

There was another story "The 12 Sluts of Christmas" a few years ago, but I really like this one better!! I love the idea of the wife giving her hubby all of these sexy gifts! I would do the same for mine too. Please keep writing!!

Fucking hot fun!

5*

The story had the most glaring hole concerning Jenna. There seemed to be a definite affair going on there. I mean an obvious affair. How could this guy, even though he's having great sex, miss the fact that his wife is having sex with someone else. The writer should have addressed this front. It was nice seeing the wife giving her husband her ass for the first time instead of the usual tripe about letting everyone in town fuck her ass because she respected her husband too much to do something so nasty with him.

Great writing! I thoroughly enjoyed the chemistry and spontaneity between the hubby and wife. What a lovely wife he has too. Alexis. True love at its finest. :P I'm not sure how I feel about the whole Jenna scenario (if she really did please her friend and hubs was just hearing things), but that didn't get in the way of everything else. Either way, it definitely surprised me as much as Jeremy during the whole story. LOVED IT!

Keep writing your fantastic stories! <3

Barf -2

I see that there are dumb comments... But I'd rather know one thing... Where is the new year's story?

Hey dumb anonymous guy? Re-read the whole story and try to understand it again. There was no lesbo act between Jenna and Alexis. Never heard of phone sex and how to play mind tricks?

Anyway, kudos to you ma'am.

You're the best writer on this site. Love your work! Five stars.

Look at stories by "Ronald Trumph" on Amazon.

.Nice combination of sweet and sexy!

GREAT story with a loving,caring,sexy wife giving hubby all he can handle for the Christmas Season. A BID 5+ for a story about a wonderful wife!

One sore spot was wifey coming home shit-faced at 4 in the morning after going out bar-hopping with her horny girlfriends.I know that the couple is madly in love,BUT bad things happen to drunk,horny women in the wee hours,and it was stated by hubby that Alexis gets foul-mouthed and naughty when drunk. That rude but sexy girlfriend was acting jealous so maybe she was looking for some muff diving with wifey. Girls Night Out sounds like a recipe for disaster.

so nice to hear of a faithful, creative, loving wife. love to of heard the story about what she went through to have a custom palm pussy made.

The creativity and dialogue are superb. Thanks for the great story!

Wonderful story, perfect for this holiday season. I loved this every word. Excellent loving, erotic, exciting tale of 2 people so in love it was perfect!

Loved all the 'visuals' and the writing. Wonder about New Year's. Thank you.p

Very well written. Throughly enjoyed the excitements

I would love to have my wife gift me like this. Problem was that there were too many stories and it seemed to take forever to get to a conclusion of the giving.

Enjoyed your Christmas story very much. Can skip the anal though.

This inspired a similar 12 days for my wife and me last year. I wish you would write the follow up to this story and let us all know what happens at new years.

You kept building Jenna and then... she vanished. No threeway?

That was a delicious trip into a romper room of sex!! The cliff hanger ~ New Year's Eve ~ will that be Jenna's cue? Will we ever know??

My only concern was Alexis going out with girlfriend after already being tipsy at happy hour. Then husband comes home at 2am and she is still out and goes to sleep. That just seems very odd instead of making sure drunk wife gets home safely.

I may not be the first to mention this, but to see "come" used where the proper word is "cum" gets very distracting for me. I don't understand how both the author and the editor(s) can miss this mistake repeatedly. I've read a few of her stories and it's the same in them all. Good stories are made poor with the wrong word constantly used. My opinion.

Christmas is my favourite holiday and you just made it that much better! I can’t wait to read everything you’ve written but I’m pacing myself lol. If I read everything now, I’ll have nothing later!

Very bad that this "illustrated" storhy has no illustration.

Dishonest.

Hope new years eve has an invite for Jenna. Come on now, don't disappoint !