All Comments on 'Love Lost, Then Found Ch. 13'

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LoneStarRiderLoneStarRiderover 12 years ago
But.....

But, what about Brianna???????

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

This story makes no sense, you jump around from chapter to chapter making it hard to follow, is he just going to have Amy and Brianna as a bit on the side or the other way around? 13 chapters in and I still can't see where this is going. Is it your intention to have a story where chapter for chapter he jumps between Amy & Brianna?

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