All Comments on 'Sugar's Office Party'

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tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
2 HORN-DOGS HOOK UP AGAIN

apparently they are in tune with each other. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Ending twist

Nice story ,quite funny in parts .

Was looking for a twist at the end that their encounter wasnt so private, like a tannoy/intercom or infra red or something(lights out movement triggers infra red ). Maybe when they stop they hear everything is too quite around them . And they are on the computer screen in every office or something . Or some other little twist just tofinish off . But still am amusing story .

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