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Piss ants!

There are so many assholes on this site it's unbelievable.
If you like a story let the author know.
If you don't make constructive comments why. Don't act like a 10 year old.
People like Chiara23 and praedar aren't even smart enough to realize they are embarrassing themselves.
Just so you know Chiara23 people praise the authors stories here because they appreciate their effort.
Authors like DG work hard to put out their stories. And you can read them for free. What do you do except act like morons?
Thanks for your hard work and your stories DG.

OK, I Fucked Up and Caught Shit

so I put on my Big Boy panties and got over it. Now let's see how many of those who got on my case never, ever, not hardly, fucked up their own selves. Not that they're wrong to get on my case if I fuck up. Like anyone whose work appears in public, be they athlete, politician (Herman Cain, Newt Gingrich, John Edwards, Bill Clinton), for-free porn editor or whoever, if I fuck up I expect to get shit. OK, now back to work.

Dear Anons (plural) The cuckold means such a husband whose wife is minimum 1 extramarital affair, that's why 55% of the all husbands and exhusbands are cuckolds.
The minority of the husbands and bachelors are not cuckolds! A little study on this area: 3 categories are among the cuckolds 1. who does not know. 2. who are unwilling. 3. who are willing. In this story the main character belongs to the 2. category.

Dear Duna, Prescribed medication is having no effect on reducing the severity of your many cognitive and psychotic disorders. Therefore, electro-convulsive therapy, also known as electro-shock, is now appropriate. Turn yourself in ASAP and bring diapers in case control is lost due to the voltage.

@ dear Anon Thank you for your therapy advice.

My Apologies

I realize my earlier comment was harsh. I see that it has been deleted as it should have been. I was frustrated more than anything else. I did see potential in this story and vilified both the writer and his editor. Sadly Estragon dropped the ball as I'm sure other editors have in the past and will do in the future. I feel that I over reacted. I know writing is not an easy task, nor is editing. I do apologize if I came across as a nasty vile person. I did not mean to do so.

Deepest regrets,
Chiara

DG Hear

Hi All, and thank you for taking the time to comment. I goofed up kind of bad with the low sperm count. Sorry about that. I did change it as well as a few spelling errors Estragon edits my stories but I always have last say. I take full responsibility for errors made.

I don't mind commenters knocking the story or even me, but please don't know my editors. I asked Estragon if he wanted me to delete any comments against him and he said "No". So all comments are still there.

I try and give my best every time and I know Estragon does too. We all make mistakes no matter how many times we go over a story, but again I'm the last to reread a story before submitting.

We'll try and do better but no promises. LOL

Again, thank you all for reading and commenting on my stories. It really means a lot to me and I really do appreciate it.

Sincere regards
DG

"I will have been married twenty years next month. Do you want to exchange stories?" I (Jay) asked.

It would have been nice if this actually happened. Instead it was a long, monotone, monologue from Beth. Followed by a long, (internal) monologue from Jay (after the fact).

Why can't the characters talk to one another and interact? Isn't that what writing is about?

You had a great opportunity to write a compelling scene and develop chemistry between the characters, but it fell short in my opinion and I quickly lost interest.

You seem to have a loyal following. Good luck in the contest.

i thought it was real

nothing unreal about this one. this is the way divorced people in shock act at times. the meeting was a little strange but the day you get the final papers hurts. he must have been a nice guy and her self preservation radar did not hit.
this is reality. the real thing was the wife not denying prior fucking around incidents before with the whore friend.

Enjoyable

While I would not classify this among your best nevertheless I still enjoyed it. Keep writing DG. You have a fan base chomping at the bit to see your next submission.

Totallt believeable -

That was a good one - it did ramble just a bit but so would the characters if they were actually telling it - so it works fine for me.

The mechanic of the early meeting with Beth was almost too convenient but was a way to make things move forward in a timely manner so go for it.

It worked well -

Instead of low sperm count PID from a cheating male partner/husband

The PID was coused a not treated clamidia infection (STD) which could couse infertility at women. Sometime spontan healing up may be. Generaly the in vitro fertilization and surgery the solution for the infertility of PID.

A SEA CRUISE OPENS COUPLES UP TO LIVE

some even get their fallopian tubes wide open. TK U MLJ LV NV

So, why do the anal fetishists like this story so much?

Don't see any mention of the stomach-turning scene of forcing wife to take feces-coated cock into mouth. Never have understood the mixing of elimination and sex in humor or in literature, even if the sources are right next door to each other. Very seldom see any mention in the stories of a the characters having much of a sense of smell; not to mention they hygiene of the situation.
Goes from 3 on original score to a 1.

There is a huge gap in the story

namely some explanation of Linda;s motives. No one cheats like that, or as much as that, without there being some reason for it. Other than that, a typical story of an honest, decent, saintly husband being betrayed by a slutty wife and the meeting a perfect replacement for her who instantly falls for him. Same old, same old.

A Happy Ending

Very rare. What's great is the cheaters got what was coming to them and the betrayed found happiness.
I hate fucking cheaters.

bull

do any of these writers have any hero with a average cock all are always huge if this is true why do the exs cheat.

Rebuttal to wythebager

Yes, some women do exactly as Linda did and if you read carefully, you would have noted that Linda and Lisa partied as whores earlier in life at Lisa's whorehouse. The suggestion is also that Linda possibly had a tryst or two through the years.

Linda was a woman who had no qualms about strange sex and took it as just normal - cheating yes, and experienced no guilt to bother her.

Read again and you'll find that she always saw her husband as trustworthy, capable of forgiveness and a strong family man so...Yes, some women do suddenly cheat - either for the thrill, the variety, the kink and last but not least - the erotic and euphoric pleasure of cheating and risking getting caught, pure excitable excitement!

This is a FIVE story and a good one, very realistic.

Thanks DG!!!

cheating wife's exposure sets off a series of events with connsequence absorbed by Linda hence trashing a long-term marriage.

The premise was fine with the lain stupidity of Linda in allowing herself to change personality and eventually, raise suspicion on herself to the eventually getting caught. The author's handling of this scene was non aggressive and extremely devoid of emotions. I felt that was a lo point in the story. The creativity of the authority seemed stymied in this regard in my own humble opinion. I felt that very heated dialogue would've been highly welcomed by the reader. Secondly, Linda (wife) is hardly mentioned toward "he end and it would have been nice to see her my proactive in her thoughts and motivations. There was definitely hope for reconciliation for this couple if the approaches were more concilitary with loving as a prime motivator. Linda was probably experiencing some type of hormonal imbalance or physchological conditions relating to empty nest syndrome or depression. Linda's biggest problem was her choice of friends which ultimately destroyed everything she cherish and believed in. Linda's only hope was to immediately week out professional counseling to have any chance whatsoever. When I see a couple on the road to disaster there always seems to be one member of the group who seems out of place; Linda was that person in this story. I truly believe that Linda was manipulated and gently coerced by her friend Lisa. Linda was as much a victim to the divorce. The retributions were far and few and in between. The weakest of the main characters were ultimately punished . There was a missed opportunity on the cruise to have single guys and others to make the move on Beth thereby creating more drama. Enjoyed the story immensely just thought I through in my two cents.

I simply loved it!

I was the kind of story I miss around here. No willing cucks and no unbelievable or cruel super BTB story. Please more! more! more!. *****

Linda was definitely at fault here...

If through their marriage he actually did manage to please her sexually then there were times when he either just wasn't enough - as in what he did worked for her but she needed more of it - or she wanted "strange cock". In either case for her to not let her husband in on that fact either meant she wanted to deceive him and/or didn't love him - either should be cause for a divorce.

No matter how much Lisa may have been a bad influence, Linda was a freaking adult - she wasn't mentally challenged or under the influence of drugs - so any of her actions were still hers to make as were the consequences from them.

She as much as admitted to being either a whore or slut on the previous event with Lisa...

Good Riddance To The Slut!

I might have had more sympathy with her pleas for forgiveness if she hadn't been a bitch for so many months prior.

If she was otherwise a loving wife who made a mistake it MAY have been forgivable.

A Cheater is A Cheater is A Cheater!

The cheater loses and the non-cheater wins, can't get much better. It was good that he did not want to know the why, the how, or anything else. She cheated with 3 different so-called guys multiple times and was a real bitch to husband and family. She only 'really loves' him after she is caught. She doesn't really know what love is. I'm glad he didn't even think of taking her back - she didn't deserve him.
A little fantasy that he found a real Love so quickly but it's the author's story and I did enjoy it. Thanks for your writing.

Sorry low mark

I just hate these stories where the husband finds the true love of his life almost instantaneously. Ok reconciliation a no go after what she had done but honestly this is just fantasy land and totally unlike real life.

Well written though.

ya, hi , anon below.

Of-course this is a fictional story, why, did you expect to read a real story?

These stories are not meant to be retelling of true events in order of appearance, if that were a requirement on this site, then you or anybody would be bored after just reading the first page, Not to say that truth/reality is boring, but rather, truth & reality can never much hold our attention & intrigue when compared with the tantalizing flavor of fiction & embellishments.
Truth/ reality, in the end may be joyous for some, devastating to others, but the journey of that truth and reality is tortuous & long.
the purpose of these stories is to get us the reader emotionally involved, either you hate the story or love it to pieces or are somewhere between the spectrum, if you are gonna search for reality in fiction then you my friend are unknowingly trying to escape your own reality, you may lose yourself in a fictional world one day.

realistic fiction vs unrealistic fiction

Hi Jimbo, different anonymous here but I have the same issues with the forced happy ending that is prevalent in many of these stories. Yes, the story is fictional but most fiction should still be believable. While we are not quite into unicorn fantasy (which should still be believable in the construct of its own story), I find the concept of our hero finding his future ideal wife before the ink is dry on the divorce not only unbelievable but actually a distraction from the story. The key characters in these stories is the cheater and the cheatee. The 'new friend' isn't really that important. I would have sooner read something from the cheater's POV. The story is still good but I just think it could be improved by concentrating on the key characters.

brilliant brilliant brilliant

what a chance to both meet in the bar and hit it off....there is such a thing as love at first sight and they were not doing it on the rebound....a great story...what a skank his ex wife was...and the kids knew she was too....great getting married on the ship and then the twins arriving....loved the fact her ex married his secretary only to find she had been boffing latinos and ended up pregnant with one of them...that was pay back for him...a great story and loved it

Loved it

Loved it, sounds a lot like my first wife, didn't need a reason to cheat just loved to do it, until she got caught and divorced then she couldn't understand why she got kicked to the curb. Yes, these stories do really happen.

Marriage down the drain

The sad part is that when husband found her at dinner she could have been nicer and apologized for attitude. If she had been smart she would have stopped her cheating after restaurant confrontation. But lust cost her everything.

Read It Again

Again, a cheating whore cunt doesn't know how good she had it until it was gone. Fucking loser. Only asshole losers cheat. And a real happy ending.
Wonderful.

I disagree with the previous comments...

You try to make your character sound strong, but he's a wimp! Please, give me a break! He gets into the hotel room and finds his wife fucking a female impersonator! He has a pocket knife...REALLY???!!!! He forces the guy to perform acts on his wife she supposedly doesn't like and photographs and videos the action. Please tell me your kidding!!!! Do you really think that this female impersonator, who screamed, "Don't hurt me." is going to be able to maintain any kind of erection under those circumstances????....Then, to abate his RAGE he cuts up their clothes?????? REALLY????!!!!!
You write your character as some macho, pathetic, asshole! He won't use physical violence because he's afraid to go to jail???? He won't tell the kids the details of her infidelity....out of concern for them????? REALLY????!!!!! Daughter screams she hates her mother and he tells her not to hate her but what she did! That she's a good mother! REALLY????!!!!! She's a pathetic excuse for a mother just because of what she did!
Strangely enough, too many of these stories start out well with a conceivable premise, then deteriorate into utter bullshit!