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by MilesEms12/06/11

Good story in a few lines.

Good story. Provocative in so few lines. It would be fun to read an expanded sequel.

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by Anonymous12/06/11

Good theme but lack of writing ability

1. Make a slow characterization
2. Develop love and passion between roll
3. Extend story with more event
That will get u 5

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by swingset6611/24/13

Nice story!

I bet we all wish Reunions would end like that. :)

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