All Comments on 'The Neighbors'

great story, great writing thanks

I liked the way you portrayed each character. You know it's awkward to invite somebody to participate in something so personal. The ending was well constructed to leave an opening to a sequel. I am looking forward to the next part of this series.

Well contructive, very hot(at least for me). Hope there is a continuation, loved it.

really liked the first part, hope the second will be up soon; love the concept with the facial fetish and hope you will extend this in thee following chapters

Very nice build up..could have added some more spice like projecting as if Lana was engaged or had a BF

I did the 1st one, and I see where you're going with this :)

Oh ps, this is just another alter ego..you know who I am .. Ill mail u ;)

excellent story! generally, I think many of these stories could use a little more detailed description of penises, pussies - slow detail. other than that you're a very fine writer, thanks!

Great Story. Any healthy sexually liberated couple would love having such as experience. I only wish it were actually a true story from your own experiences.