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by Anonymous12/06/11

Swiming Hole - Anal

I am a mature, bisexual crossdresser and enjoyed the story very much, and would love to experience something similar.
Sincerely,
Josie of Augusta, Georgia

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by Anonymous12/07/11

Good but could have been better

A really good idea and generally well written- but I found it just a bit all over the place. It could do with an editor to tighten it up and keep the same tone, but organise it a bit better. Apart from that excellent!

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