All Comments on 'Bait and Switch Ch. 10'

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redskyesredskyesover 12 years ago
Loving it!

Can't get enough of this story. Great job! :)

BS1991BS1991over 12 years ago
A+

Keep it coming. This is a great story and we all really appreciate how you're rolling out the new chapters.

Can't wait to see how you have him prepare to defend the planet. (By the way, he didn't practice his switches, even though Derek's threat was already gone. He needs to do that some more.)

Really, the only negative thing I can think to say is that you over-use commas a bit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great story

I love the stories but I'm getting a little frustrated at the lack of progress with the main plot...

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter though :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Wonderment

I have only read through this tenth installment of your series thus far, but I wanted to tell you just how wonderful it really is. Your writing is fantastic, your characters are engaging, and the sex is varied and incredible. I applaud your efforts, and hope to read much more from you. Thank you for sharing this with us.

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