All Comments on 'At His Mercy Ch. 01'

Please please please write more! Its excellent!!!

I wonder who she is?

Well done a tantalising first chapter with adventure and a mystery to lure the reader ever onward. Also congratulations on good language and editing skills keep this standard up and it will be one of the treasures of the site. Definately a diamond among the dross that has infected the site recently.

Very intriguing start! Please continue.

I really really hope you continue this. I read it last week and I can't stop thinking about it. I really want to find out what happens.

I can not wait for the rest.

Thank you for writing. it was a pleasure reading.