The Second Time Around Ch. 02

amazing

I do believe I am falling in love with this story can't wait for more

Very

Unexpected twist

Intriguing

I am anxious to find out if Caid/Adriano gets back with Bridgette.

What makes this interracial?

so good

it's so good so far can't wait to read more, as for one of the previous comments i'm pretty sure it's interracial cause of Brigitte and Adriano different skin tones, nationality etc. but anyway hope to read another chapter soon keep up the brilliant work.

Intriguing...

I love intrigue and to be intrigued. Ms Harper I cannot wait for the tale you are about to weave to unfold.

did not see that twist coming, please continue this quickly

That was a holy shit moment if I ever saw one

Seriously - he took the body of the man he unintentionally murdered? Oh my gosh this is gonna get REAL good!

5 stars for a great story!

Interracial

MarvinS black ppl and individuals of Mexican or Spanish origin ate COMPELETLY differnet, just bc they have "darker" skin doesn't mean they are the same. Plz get out n experience life more or mayb read chp 1 when they mention she is a blk girl... Thx

Great story can't wait for more!!

So Original !!!!

Im beginning to love this story Its so sad that he had to die but know he can make everything right with the world and get his love back without his family getting in the way

Another great chapter!

I'm curious as to why Brigitte came to pray for him (Adriano - with Caid's mind/soul) everyday. It's a very kind thing to do, but still seems odd to me. I'm looking forward to when they are back in contact with each other to see why.

Wow what a twist

I was confused but as the story was continued I was like WOW what a twist in everything. I can't wait til the next ch. is out.

You have me waiting

on two stories. Brilliant. I am so selfish that I hope you will write them before Christmas but no, enjoy the season, we'll just have to be patient. Thanks.

With each chapter that continues, I get pulled in more and more. This a really cool, interesting story. I'm anxious to see what will happen next, and how Caid will settle into life with his new family, and with that new body of his. You're doing an amazing job and I can't wait for the next installment. Keep the chapters coming, please. :)

Great

middle, now we need the end to blow our minds and soon...

When

will you finish?

A flower in bloom

Sweetie you seem to be taking your time with this and I feel you savoring the writing.
Caid is a step-in. I can't wait to see where you go with this. He has two prime objectives and it is about two kinds of love, both denied him in his previous incarnation.
There have been actual situations like this over the years. Folks feel uncomfortable with it; guess that's why you don't hear much about it.
What the heck, death is not the enemy. Love has a tendency to cross all barriers and that is just the way it is.

*****

I thoroughly enjoyed that .. stirred alot of emotions and had me in tears and its only just begun.. will read the rest of the chapters when i done my house work or it will never get done today.. i'll come back and get comfy with a nice glass of wine.. Great job..

This is turning out to be a good story

Well...

I was not expecting that to happen. His death and reincarnation is an awesome twist! I wasn't sure of the story in the beginning, now I don't know what to expect! I can't wait to see how this turns out!