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Fuck, This Girl... Ch. 04

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by Anonymous

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by juicycaramel12/31/11

FUCK YEAH!!!!!!!

fuck this man lol

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by girlthat39201/01/12

DAMN I LOVE THIS STORY!

Go Ellie get your fuck on with sexy Marcus!!!

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by Anonymous01/01/12

*****

Five.

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by THELOVELY1GLO01/09/12

Sometimes

we find love in the weirdest places with the most unlikely people. Good for them!

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by Anonymous07/31/12

Oh god

Og god this was just so damn lustful. Fuck, this story...

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by Comentarista8206/05/15

Thanks for the 2 pages!

He's falling for Ellie? Love reading that, because he's not a jerk!

I loved the switch to Ellie's point of view. I specifically enjoyed her sarcastic reply/thought here:

"Hi, Ellie. Ready to bring that mark up?" he asked. Oh I'll bring something up alright, won't be my mark...

Keep up the great work! It's hot and you added details to him cumming. Great! I'm hooked.

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