While I liked the overall message the story conveyed the whole thing seemed confusing, especially at the start. It was hard to seperate the characters out and the story's plot seemed to wander about. I've read a few of your stories and liked them very well but this one failed to do much for me. But hey, you can't please 'em all. Some folks liked the story after all. I guess Mark Twain said it best. "It is not good that we all think alike. After all, it is a difference of opinion that makes a horse race."
Love the slapping of the cum cucks clan! As soon as i realized this was a staement rather than a story I got it. It is shit that a cheating whore can blean you out. My ex whore still gets pay from me...filthy cheating cunt. Loved it Hue!!!
Good story about a succesful divorce. A commenter buddy's idea. Why we like the revenge stories, because in the majority of the divorces the inocent exhusbands suck and the revenge stories show some lucky guys who are succesful against the cheating wife.
I like your writing. You hate submissive cucks as much as I do. Keep going...You da man. The cucks and sluts get migraines after reading your stories. I see you've locked out the anonymouse assholes, well done. The next next time I write something, I will do the same. All of the writers with balls should follow suit. 5 stars
I started reading this and got so confused ... most likely because of all the characters you tossed into the story IMMEDIATELY. Can't tell the players without a program. I stopped reading it when I determined that your title for this piece was a total lie. I guess the writing must have sucked if you can't keep up with the story for the first few paragraphs. I also found it really funny that people who did like it responded with "you da man". I think in this case "duhh" might fit better with the person commenting that time. I see your hook for the story but you lost My interest when I felt I was trying to keep up with characters I knew nothing about. Kinda like staring at a fish tank full of fish.
3 stars.
OK, so I went to the trouble of getting a user ID. So now we are buddies. right??? Naaa I didn't think so, you still have no idea. You all get sooo bent out of shape when someone post an anon negative comment but I don't see anyone getting very upset when it is an anon positive comment. So I made up a BS email and a BS user name on here just so you guys will know it is me...the anonymous guy.
Now I will just say I liked your story. i gave it a 4 only because the title made me think some of those other anon posters were right about you. LOL Keep writing stories like this.
The revenge on the cheating wife, and the life of the unwillingly cuckolded husband in your stories is so complete, that it is humorous. I am still chuckling. Thanks.
with all the tales and comments of men getting the short end of the stick, maybe it's time to start a new trend, taking the money and hauling ass. I understand that you can still get top notch fake documentation and you wouldn't have to leave the states.
and for the rest, I'm sorry that my using the word cuckold lead your reading of a story about a man that doesn't sit there like a bitch while his wife is fucking everyone the company payroll. That's just my "kink".
I enjoy stories were the cuck fights back.
To many women seem to for get which man feed, clothed, supported, raised their children. Only for some other guy to get free pussy !
Courts are Organized Crime. Marriage Counseling is a dick joke. The husband when victimized becomes victim again in the court. To beat the courts, you have to have a good plan.
Excellent
Keep writing, I like the concept, and this one's pretty funny as well!
Love and Sex ...
... are two different things.
Not Your Best Effort
While I liked the overall message the story conveyed the whole thing seemed confusing, especially at the start. It was hard to seperate the characters out and the story's plot seemed to wander about. I've read a few of your stories and liked them very well but this one failed to do much for me. But hey, you can't please 'em all. Some folks liked the story after all. I guess Mark Twain said it best. "It is not good that we all think alike. After all, it is a difference of opinion that makes a horse race."
OK
What happen?????
Excellant!!!
Love the slapping of the cum cucks clan! As soon as i realized this was a staement rather than a story I got it. It is shit that a cheating whore can blean you out. My ex whore still gets pay from me...filthy cheating cunt. Loved it Hue!!!
It is not my idea
Good story about a succesful divorce. A commenter buddy's idea. Why we like the revenge stories, because in the majority of the divorces the inocent exhusbands suck and the revenge stories show some lucky guys who are succesful against the cheating wife.
THE CUCK CROWS TWICE
and the chickens listen. TK U MLJ LV NV
?????
I know this is discussed to death but how it this even close to erotica? It is so very boring and impractical it is retarded.
Huedogg
I like your writing. You hate submissive cucks as much as I do. Keep going...You da man. The cucks and sluts get migraines after reading your stories. I see you've locked out the anonymouse assholes, well done. The next next time I write something, I will do the same. All of the writers with balls should follow suit. 5 stars
Unbelievable
I started reading this and got so confused ... most likely because of all the characters you tossed into the story IMMEDIATELY. Can't tell the players without a program. I stopped reading it when I determined that your title for this piece was a total lie. I guess the writing must have sucked if you can't keep up with the story for the first few paragraphs. I also found it really funny that people who did like it responded with "you da man". I think in this case "duhh" might fit better with the person commenting that time. I see your hook for the story but you lost My interest when I felt I was trying to keep up with characters I knew nothing about. Kinda like staring at a fish tank full of fish.
3 stars.
This is a very fast moving story
There isn't any wasted words in this story.
Almost like a documentary on cheaing wives, and how to deal with them.
Good story though.
Thanks for the read
Xmas Greetings from the Dogg
Out-F******-Standing!!!
Short, sharp and a sad indictment on the state of modern Legislation
Seasons Greetings Hue!!
OK, so I went to the trouble of getting a user ID. So now we are buddies. right??? Naaa I didn't think so, you still have no idea. You all get sooo bent out of shape when someone post an anon negative comment but I don't see anyone getting very upset when it is an anon positive comment. So I made up a BS email and a BS user name on here just so you guys will know it is me...the anonymous guy.
Now I will just say I liked your story. i gave it a 4 only because the title made me think some of those other anon posters were right about you. LOL Keep writing stories like this.
Great Story by a Great Writer!
Dooode U ROK!
It's a chuckle
The revenge on the cheating wife, and the life of the unwillingly cuckolded husband in your stories is so complete, that it is humorous. I am still chuckling. Thanks.
You know....
with all the tales and comments of men getting the short end of the stick, maybe it's time to start a new trend, taking the money and hauling ass. I understand that you can still get top notch fake documentation and you wouldn't have to leave the states.
thanks for the support
and for the rest, I'm sorry that my using the word cuckold lead your reading of a story about a man that doesn't sit there like a bitch while his wife is fucking everyone the company payroll. That's just my "kink".
BRILLIANT STORY
Finally a writer who's men keep their junk!!
Mr. Ass' kids ages
If it was 8 years ago, his kids with Mrs. Ass wouldn't be 5 and 6 years old. Just a minor edit would help on that one.
Hawkeye,What kind of pussy is afraid....
...of anonymous?
Excellent
The only thing I hate worse than cucks are cheating skank whore slut wives. They should all die in pain, like mine did.
OH YEAH
Short and short and sweet lol
Yep short - to the point and he wins - GOAL!!! lol
Again it could damn near work - good for him heh.
No depth to the characters but there was too little time for it this time - for sure heh 0-
Thanks for the offering.
You gotta be kidding me??? We gotta get this boy off mommies welfare computer!!!
Let's take up a collection and get this guy a book on how to go from inner city middle school english to writing stories!
Standing up
I enjoy stories were the cuck fights back.
To many women seem to for get which man feed, clothed, supported, raised their children. Only for some other guy to get free pussy !
Nice
It's great re-reading the excellent tales again. You wanna cheat you pay the piece. Cheating assholes should all suffer in extreme pain.
#2 TO CIR-CUM-VENT THE SYSTEM
one must make great plans and schemes, TK U MLJ LV NV
That was good
Thanks, and that was good. Real good. I actually enjoyed this story.
I like what Cueball and a couple others said.
I think aside from stories such as yours, I look for the comments from Tazz to see if I can decipher them.
Don't stop, Tazz. I know there are some that hate on you, but you never have a bad thing to say, you just say what you do pretty cryptically.
Carry on, mate.
You too, Hue
I Would Like To See More Payment From Jack
Courts are Organized Crime. Marriage Counseling is a dick joke. The husband when victimized becomes victim again in the court. To beat the courts, you have to have a good plan.
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