All Comments on 'The Heart of the Flower'

by Oceanus

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Desert PrincessDesert Princessalmost 19 years ago
Well done

Very nicely done, well written. Your story provoked an erotic fantasy to come forth and was a joy to read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
interesting

I guess it's like a chick story . I think you read a little too much Harlan Ellison . Still , while it's not my cup of tea it had interesting imagery . I didn't really quite buy the progression from woman to assimilation into plant .But really do keep writing please .

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