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The Heart of the Flower

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by Desert Princess07/06/05

Well done

Very nicely done, well written. Your story provoked an erotic fantasy to come forth and was a joy to read.

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by Anonymous06/02/09

interesting

I guess it's like a chick story . I think you read a little too much Harlan Ellison . Still , while it's not my cup of tea it had interesting imagery . I didn't really quite buy the progression from woman to assimilation into plant .But really do keep writing please .

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