All Comments on 'Jacked Ch. 02'

very good, loved the climax, straight in with the action with a twist at the end leaviing you wanting more

brilliant. Had my 9 inches as hard as a rock reading this.

Do your research on the vehicle you use in the storyline. Porsche don’t have a trunk in the rear of the vehicle, that’s the engine compartment and the trunk or luggage compartment and spare tire is in the front. The engine and luggage compartments are the same on all Porsche models. If she is in a halter top and jeans you explain that she changed clothes before the talk at the university. Otherwise the dripping would have caused a wet spot on the jeans she was wearing in the first story. Please remember to slow down and proofread, auto correct for spelling is not going to help with grammar. Overall your storyline and sex scenes were excellent.